A remake of an old Gmod comic I did about 4 years ago. This time with actual editing and a story that isn't a generic "STOP NUCLEAR MISSLEBOMB, USA IS DOMINATE" story that you see in COD games.
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The Loose End/TheLooseEndE1F1.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The Loose End/TheLooseEndE1F2.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The Loose End/TheLooseEndE1F3.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The Loose End/TheLooseEndE1F4.png[/IMG]
[h2]To be continued. No, seriously, like, for real.[/h2]
[del]how cliche[/del]
(Also, CC would be highly appreciated. And yes, I know my posing skills are shit.)
Way way way too much text in those speech bubbles in a font that is small and hard to read. Take some time and read this. I think you'll get a lot out of it if you really read it and take it to heart.
[url]http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1110069[/url]
Other suggestions...
Get rid of the interactive component. Just throw it out and make up your own damn mind about how [i]you[/i] want [i]your[/i] story to be told.
I don't know what you were trying to do with the overlays and desaturation, but all of it is making it worse.
I wouldn't be taking the time to write this if I didn't think you had something worth critiquing. Keep improving.
After procrastinating for several days after actually taking screenshots I got around to editing them.
So here it is.
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The%20Loose%20End/TheLooseEndE2F1.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The%20Loose%20End/TheLooseEndE2F2.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The%20Loose%20End/TheLooseEndE2F3.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The%20Loose%20End/TheLooseEndE2F4.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i960.photobucket.com/albums/ae87/johny1337/The%20Loose%20End/TheLooseEndE2F5.png[/IMG]
[del](The law of Chekhov's Gun is now in effect *hinthint*)[/del]
[QUOTE=certified;33836001][del](The law of Chekhov's Gun is now in effect *hinthint*)[/del][/QUOTE]
Tank rampage.
I can see you didn't actually read the tutorial.
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