Lost in Video Game World

[JulliTarfur]

I started this comic a while ago so I'm still a n00b at this x)
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[no-named]

[QUOTE=JulliTarfur;24243663]I started this comic a while ago so I'm still a n00b at this x)
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That's not how image tags work.
Just use regular [img]LINK[/img] tags.

[JulliTarfur]

Yeah I used the "Get BB Codes for Forums" and I don't realy know how this works o.o

[HWECQI]

[QUOTE=JulliTarfur;24244501]Yeah I used the "Get BB Codes for Forums" and I don't realy know how this works o.o[/QUOTE]
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Hit that yellow button with the mountain, it will ask for the url, put the url there.

It's simple.

[Shootzki]

 [IMG]Put URL of image here[/IMG] 

Also, I find Imageshack slow. Does anyone else?

[JulliTarfur]

Yeah I tried the [IMG] thing but then there came an icon of a broken Picture

Imageshack is the only one that I know of which can Multiple upload pics x)

[Rastifan]

Use this site [url]http://filesmelt.com/simple[/url]
Follow directions below.
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[HWECQI]

[QUOTE=JulliTarfur;24244751]Yeah I tried the [IMG] thing but then there came an icon of a broken Picture

Imageshack is the only one that I know of which can Multiple upload pics x)[/QUOTE]

:doh:

You see on the imageshack page it says "Direct link"? You have to use THAT url, not the normal page url.

[JulliTarfur]

Hahahaha thx Rastifan

I feel very very n00bishly hated xD

[Rastifan]

[QUOTE=JulliTarfur;24244876]Hahahaha thx Rastifan

I feel very very n00bishly hated xD[/QUOTE]

Follow the instructions and you should be fine. Just edit your Op.
Filesmelt takes multiply images and do not resize, but is a bit unsteady now and then.

Imageshack is a horrible hosting site.

[JulliTarfur]

Yeah figured it out, uploading already ^^

[editline]09:11PM[/editline]

pwnage!

[HWECQI]

[QUOTE=Rastifan;24244996]Follow the instructions and you should be fine. Just edit your Op.
Filesmelt takes multiply images and do not resize, but is a bit unsteady now and then.

Imageshack is a horrible hosting site.[/QUOTE]

Image shack has worked fine for me, hasn't resized anything of mine.

Filesmelt is neccisary though with huge images.

And oh god the panals are huge. And I can already tell posing needs heavy improvement.

[Rastifan]

3 panels in a vertical row of this size won't work.
2 panels max and make them fit the screen.
Each picture could be half the size of what they are now. They are way to big for a comic and slow to load. Most people will not wait.

You need to practice your posing a lot more. This really need a lot of improvement. And a very random choice of characters do not help either. The rundown!

Get better at posing, make the character choice believable, and above all. Have a story line ready before posing.

Ps! Never use maps with errors in the texture. At least don't let it show.

[JulliTarfur]

Yeah i'm sorry i'm no good with Finger and Face Posing, I've played Garrysmod for a while but still i'm no a pro yet, I basicly love Garrysmod but don't know how long posing ragdolls can be fun so I try to do something with the posing, but I appreciate the criticize you gave me x)

[HWECQI]

I have some criticism for you in general.

You need to stop using the "XD X) :), ect" emotes, there are emotes already built into facepunch and people will just ridicule you if you keep using them.

And try to use the best english you can, people will take you more seriously if you do.

[JulliTarfur]

Well i'm awfully sorry I just dropped a glass of Coca Cola onto my Keyboard a week ago, so the double dots doesn't work, I try to use my Best English, but as you can tell my English isn't the worst

[HWECQI]

[QUOTE=JulliTarfur;24247252]Well i'm awfully sorry I just dropped a glass of Coca Cola onto my Keyboard a week ago, so the double dots doesn't work, I try to use my Best English, but as you can tell my English isn't the worst[/QUOTE]

You don't even need to use the semicolon, there's a panal for all the emotes, you just click on the emote and it comes up.

And even if your English isn't the worst, that doesn't mean you shouldn't try to improve it.

I'm not the only one who's going to end up telling you this if you don't try.

[spartan-9081]

Why on earth would you take screens for serious use when your cubemaps are fucked [all those purple and black checkerboard overlays on props]...

[Merv]

fuck

too big to see anything

[Rastifan]

[QUOTE=spartan-9081;24253187]Why on earth would you take screens for serious use when your cubemaps are fucked [all those purple and black checkerboard overlays on props]...[/QUOTE]

He says he is new at this. Give him a chance to learn.

[timberwold]

I loved the comic, I don't care about posing very much

[JulliTarfur]

Thank you ^^

[The Combine]

What the fuck am I reading?

[Hollywood SN]

Oh jesus, the posing is horrible, and the talking makes me cringe, try to improve on both of those.

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[QUOTE=The Combine;24312757]What the fuck am I reading?[/QUOTE]

[Mosquito]

It's a really long comic and I see you put much work into it, yeah the posing it pretty bad and not realistic but myeah, it's pretty good actually! keep improving. :)