Not as good as my last one but still postworthy IMO
Rate/Hate/Comment and if you rate dumb, be man enough to make a comment about it.
[IMG]http://uppix.net/7/a/2/f9e22579864772b7dcb64463899f7.jpg[/IMG]
The blur comes in a little too strongly, too quickly.
Too much area in the middle of the picture without focus - more of the picture should be filled with the two main characters, with Zoey taking the majority of the space.
I know what you mean Chesty. I posed the Smoker first, added the tongue and after that it was too late. So much wasted space :frown: I should have reposed the whole thing.
Oh well, gonna try harder next time.
Thanks for the input!
[QUOTE=FrEeKy ThInG;24690873]dude you blur EVERYTHING TOO MUCH. but its nice.[/QUOTE]
Noted. Gonna use less Super DoF next time.
good.
dont get us wrong it looks alright how it is. just a bit too blurry if you get me.
[QUOTE=FrEeKy ThInG;24690947]good.
dont get us wrong it looks alright how it is. just a bit too blurry if you get me.[/QUOTE]
Yeah that + the wasted space are kinda a turn off.
Must.Get.Better!
You know, I like you Combine. I honestly don't understand why there are always dumbs in your threads. Rated art, I have nothing to say that hasn't already been said.
Well thanks Hunter.
I wouldnt mind if those retards would actually post and flame me instead of hiding behind their boxes. What a pussy way to state ones opinion.
[QUOTE=Hunterdnrc;24691439]You know, I like you Combine. I honestly don't understand why there are always dumbs in your threads. Rated art, I have nothing to say that hasn't already been said.[/QUOTE]
This. I like your poses.
You can see the tongue model ending underneath her left armpit.
[QUOTE=nardix;24691521]You can see the tongue model ending underneath her left armpit.[/QUOTE]
Lemme fix that.
I expected smoker/zoey porn when i came in here.
I was proven rong, thank god.
[QUOTE=AaronM202;24691629]I expected smoker/zoey porn when i came in here.
I was proven rong, thank god.[/QUOTE]
Check the S-Pose Megathread in 3-4 days.
:smug:
:ohdear:
oh, and you missed a pun.
My english sucks so thats not a surprise to me. :smile:
[QUOTE=AaronM202;24691734]:ohdear:
oh, and you missed a pun.[/QUOTE]
I don't see how a guy in the TF2 comics thread obsessed with Scout is even remotely relevant to this picture.
[QUOTE=The Combine;24691475]Well thanks Hunter.
[B]I wouldnt mind if those retards would actually post and flame me instead of hiding behind their boxes. What a pussy way to state ones opinion.[/B][/QUOTE]
Why do ratings on a website matter to you so much?
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Anyways, picture is fine just need to tone down on that blur
It's like sonic the fucking hedgehog sped through this pic, damn.
Its not the ratings but those cowards make me rage but I guess it shouldnt even bother me.
16x16 pixel images
SRS BUSINESS
You make feel stupid bropimp.
[QUOTE=Zeraxify;24691907]I don't see how a guy in the TF2 comics thread obsessed with Scout is even remotely relevant to this picture.[/QUOTE]
His name is rong and the word i should of used is "Wrong" i changed it for a joke. :downsbravo:
Please dont start this here. Comment on the picture please.
Looks good, but the tounge looks wierd.
I say your "It's Cola time" was your best pose I seen out of the others I saw.
6 dumb ratings cuz it's "brown" lmao.
I like it, sometimes open space isn't necessarily a bad thing, altho you could have made it more interested in this one, with more in the middle. Just keep in mind, you don't HAVE to fill up every inch of a pic.
Also, the tongue is not very well made, way too thick, and the perspective of the tongue is different then the perspective of the people.
Good posing tho, and nice lighting.
Thanks :buddy:
My problem is mainly the color, not that it's brown but it's because you mostly rely on one color throughout the picture and it makes it all look monochromed and washed out.
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