• My first Machinima ** GNOME**
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This is my first try at this, i think i am going to add more to the end so less is to the imagination. please let me know what you think. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V7nRDyl0vc0[/media]
It's too slowly paced and the framerate and film effects make it unpleasant to watch. The music is also a little stress-inducing.
The framerate is slow and detracts from the film, unless you meant it to be so. Otherwise, a good movie. Quite a creepy flick.
Your art direction was cool, however work on that framerate, and also maybe do a bit more set design. The title at the beginning was rather meh as well.
This has potential
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