[Video] Greetings from Garry's mod : Episode 1

[PoliceTcheque]

Hi everbody :downs: ! Here is my first video on Gmod, I'd like some feedback on it !

Here is it :

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h548mLaAcvc&feature=plcp&context=C3908e8dUDOEgsToPDskIp2yZVGoLIE5Eh_tYQRko3[/url]

Thanks ! :wink:

[disseminate]

- use original content. do not borrow stuff from overworked unfunny series.
- there are ten million videos identical to this one - the 'static interspaced skits' thing hasn't been funny in years
- it was much longer than it needed to be
- faceposer messups are only funny in context
- do not use your voice
- use source recorder to remove lag

[PoliceTcheque]

Thanks for the advices ! I'll keep this in mind for my next video ! It's only my first one and your advices will be very helpful for me ! :downs:

[Cobaiye]

Disseminate, I think you're a little bit tough... I think he's doing it pretty well for a first try. I subbed to your channel, I want to see how you're improving by the time. :wink:

[PoliceTcheque]

Thanks Cobaiye ! Don't worry I'm gonna improve ! By the way there is a video I made after this one :

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OwcgzpWmmck&list=UUKzS7KVh83obD5BZCMVwgrw&index=7&feature=plpp_video[/url]

[Cobaiye]

That's a lot better mate !

[PoliceTcheque]

Thanks again mate ! :D