[B]As the title says.... The crime.[/B]
[video=youtube;7bW75OwVXZI]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bW75OwVXZI&spfreload=10[/video]
[IMG]http://wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/a6bf14355.jpg[/IMG]
Darker version.
[IMG]http://wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/9e988840ad70.jpg[/IMG]
With title.
[IMG]http://wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/f640270bb892.jpg[/IMG]
Very nice, I like how you created the background dark gloomy street really rings the 40s theme into it.
what's wrong with the guy in the back's hand, jesus christ
[QUOTE='Ninja Nub[NOR];50005528']what's wrong with the guy in the back's hand, jesus christ[/QUOTE]
Ahh haha, you can't really see it but hes holding a bit of his shirt like this
[IMG]http://puu.sh/nTRuf.jpg[/IMG]
yeah but his rigging is completely fucked up and it looks like his hand is deformed
[QUOTE=McTbone;50005546]yeah but his rigging is completely fucked up and it looks like his hand is deformed[/QUOTE]
ah then not my fault i didn't rig them, haha
THE Crime
someone pissed all over this fire hydrant
[I]and it wasn't a dog[/I].
Very nice but too dark, needs more contrast, some bright rim lighting on the 2 dudes.
[editline]26th March 2016[/editline]
It's actually a really good pic now that I look at it again.
Love the idea and theme you were going for. Posing and the scene build overall looks good. It's a bit dark in your poster but this issue can be solve by adding in some filling light and rim lighting. Some street lamp and/or the headlight of a car could have added more in this scene since i'm assuming this is in a urban environment.
Looks nice though.
[B]Edit:[/B]
Looking at this again, you should also brighten up the building and the background.
With the title version: typically when you make a title you want the most important subject of the title to be the largest. For instance words like 'the', 'of the', 'in' should always be smaller than the main subject of the title, otherwise it looks odd and unbalanced.
the T is the first letter in the title so he capitalised it. makes perfect sense to me.
Nice job, but i would suggest that you make the Font looks abit worn out or darker, at least try not to make it look too basic give it a little bit of editing, it can be rusty or anything really. just try not to give it a basic spacing on the inside,
just a tip.
Keep doing this and i am sure you'll get better
Also, if it's Raining try to make the Font look wet or something close to it.
[QUOTE=Bundesheer;50005556]ah then not my fault i didn't rig them, haha[/QUOTE]
turn the arm aswell not just the hand, that happens with a lot of models
[QUOTE=Joazzz;50008766]the T is the first letter in the title so he capitalised it. makes perfect sense to me.[/QUOTE]
Not what I was referring to. I meant the general size of the text. 'THE' overshadows 'Crime', that seems to imply that THE is the more important aspect of the title, which isn't the case.
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