in loneliness and pain
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This is very nice. Is this some sort of a map or a scenebuild? I would've made shadows slightly brighter though.
Pretty sure it's a scenebuild, this is the house seen in the pic : [url]http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=838877321&searchtext=old+house[/url]
His head is visually cut the by roof line which in my opinion hurts composition. Also I'd blur the birds similarly to the trees below them.
[QUOTE=VIoxtar;51945143]His head is visually cut the by roof line which in my opinion hurts composition. Also I'd blur the birds similarly to the trees below them.[/QUOTE]
Would you say his head be above roof or below?
His shoulders are raised a bit too much. It looks stiff and unnatural, as does the lack of fingerposing.
Both are better, but above feels even betterer
I will see what I can do with the birds. Not sure about the character, since I do not have the save anymore.
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