• Tension, Shotgun, Soldier, Spy
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I cocked up the lighting and the camera focus, but I thought the rest of it was okay. [video=youtube;WSZbgmzw3Vs]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WSZbgmzw3Vs[/video]
Videos under 1 minute don't get their own thread.
[QUOTE=Creeper120;36731036]Videos under 1 minute don't get their own thread.[/QUOTE] Oh. Well, it didn't say that in the rules, and I've seen a bunch of other people make new threads for their short videos, so I figured it'd be okay. Guess I was mistaken. Sorry.
I think it's ok. People make those accidents anyway.
[QUOTE=evlbzltyr;36731073]Oh. Well, it didn't say that in the rules, and I've seen a bunch of other people make new threads for their short videos, so I figured it'd be okay. Guess I was mistaken. Sorry.[/QUOTE] It's more of a suggestion than a rule.
[QUOTE=Smashman;36731277]It's more of a suggestion than a rule.[/QUOTE] Cut him some slack... It's 55 seconds, close enough.
Some of the shots felt to long like looking at the shotgun.
It was well put together, except yeah I agree that the editing needs to be a little tighter. With the shotgun, you get a nice look at it from his point of view, then you get a long look from behind the shotgun as he stands there staring at it. Next thing you know you see legs running. I'd suggest trying: same look from his point of view, then shorter look from behind shotgun showing him starting to move forward(not just standing there staring at it), then cut to his running legs.
[QUOTE=Creeper120;36731036]Videos under 1 minute don't get their own thread.[/QUOTE] Can someone please tell me where this is posted by a moderator? Because it isn't in the official rules section...
[QUOTE=bull04;36731465]Cut him some slack... It's 55 seconds, close enough.[/QUOTE] Hence why I rated Creeper dumb and stated that it was a suggestion and not a rule.
I think that the soldier dying animation could have been better, but overall good job.
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