• My first SFM
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I made this about a year ago and I never got around to uploading it until now. [video=youtube;3Er93TM6EHE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Er93TM6EHE[/video] "Meem trolls the wrong demoman." This was originally a "graph editor only" test in source filmmaker but then it quickly spiraled out of controll and ended up being my first ever sfm animation (aside from the tutorial animation thats too shitty to count, i may upload that some time in the future) Anyway this is also the first animation I've ever made so criticize me constructively or destructively! Thanks sfm & facepunch community for making awesome videos that inspired me to make this shit.
Pretty good. I think the rock bouncing was the best of the animation, the rest felt a bit too stiff. But it's a great first SFM video. I liked the subtle "die" you put in there.
Stiff isn't always bad but yes, certain parts could have used an extra smooth touch. Regardless it was well animated for a first.
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