This is my first map. It is a road through a small forested town at night. 3d skybox, cafe, gas station, pharmacy. Tell me what you think!
[img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/2815/gmnightway0008.jpg[/img]
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[img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1338/gmnightway0006.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8485/gmnightway0002.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4795/gmnightway0001.jpg[/img]
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It's pretty good for a first map, but some textures are incorrectly used there are no door frames.
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It's much, [B]much[/B] better than most first maps.
Rather blocky, looks ok apart form missing door frames and mis-placed textures, improve on them. Also for a first map it's ok, better than a few i have seen before.
[QUOTE=~ZOMG;20862420]It's pretty good for a first map, but some textures are incorrectly used there are no door frames.
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It's much, [B]much[/B] better than most first maps.[/QUOTE]
Thanks i will work on the door frames
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[QUOTE=MarioMan10CP;20862466]Thanks i will work on the door frames[/QUOTE]
I also want to know how to make map less laggy
The hills made me want to kill myself.
Much better than most first maps, though.
Oh hey, you're a Saint.
6th pic
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Those are completely horrid hills.
[url]www.interlopers.net[/url]
Look at a few tutorials on there. Other than that it really is not bad at all for a first map.
[QUOTE=gerbils_alt_2;20862709]6th pic
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Those are completely horrid hills.
[url]www.interlopers.net[/url]
Look at a few tutorials on there. Other than that it really is not bad at all for a first map.[/QUOTE]
I know i'm trying to fix those hills. thanks for the website i'll use it
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whenever i try to make displacements they are really jagged and pointy, how to i make them smooth and round?
Update new stuff!!!
3D Skybox improved.
[img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/6655/gmnightway0010.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img710.imageshack.us/i/gmnightway0025.jpg/[/img]
Improved Cafe
[img]http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/6987/gmnightway0011.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/1024/gmnightway0012.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2628/gmnightway0014.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/824/gmnightway0028.jpg[/img]
Improved Gas Station
[img]http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/615/gmnightway0019.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2542/gmnightway0018.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3591/gmnightway0017.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2542/gmnightway0021.jpg[/img]
Added Pharmacy Supplies and dead survivor
[img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4927/gmnightway0022.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/2850/gmnightway0024.jpg[/img]
This is really good for a first map compared to most people's. Although...
[img_thumb]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3591/gmnightway0017.jpg[/img_thumb]
I doubt a car looking like that would still have lights on.
[img_thumb]http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2542/gmnightway0021.jpg[/img_thumb]
Try to use a [url=http://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Light_spot]Light_spot[/url] and a [url=http://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Point_spotlight]point_spotlight[/url] here.
[img_thumb]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2542/gmnightway0018.jpg[/img_thumb]
Your vending machines emit light behind them? Try sticking to at least one or 2 texture for the walls, its confusing what kind of theme your building is.
[img_thumb]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/6655/gmnightway0010.jpg[/img_thumb]
While this is better yes, try and smooth out your displacement a bit more so that it looks more natural.
Mess up the tables and chairs and add more of them.
Here is fixed car spotlights:
[img]http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6971/gmnightway0041.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1873/gmnightway0038.jpg[/img]
Added New Power Plant! It was a bitch to make.
[img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/4088/gmnightway0031.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1345/gmnightway0032.jpg[/img]
Little Details
[img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/1636/gmnightway0037.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/4396/gmnightway0044.jpg[/img]
[img_thumb]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/1636/gmnightway0037.jpg[/img_thumb][img_thumb]http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/4396/gmnightway0044.jpg[/img_thumb]
Whats going on with the ceilings?
Use the point_spotlight entity I liked you, too. Your map would look a lot better with it.
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