GM_Secred_world_v1 - Developers

So guys my idea was a underground lab map and so this is it . i build on this map 1 week ago it by 25% of 100% map is not finish it has no textures and no models im moment ^^ but so here the links [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10041.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10040.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10039.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10038.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10037.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10036.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10035.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10034.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10033.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10032.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10031.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10030.jpg[/media] more screens coming soon ^^ and here is my little video :D [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpVa0TQqIok[/media]

It looks... nice. All you're really showing is geometry but I like the layout so far.

thx but yeah i know it in moment only geometry but the other things like models and textures coming

You only need one pair of [noparse][media][/media][/noparse] tags around all the images.

Can't tell what much of the geometry in the first couple screenies is supposed to be.

sorry man. but a fullbright bunch of blocks does not really deserve a thread.

Gotta agree with st33m. Too little work has been done to show off this piece. I can't comment on anything about your map without lighting, props, decals yadda yadda, which makes this thread pretty pointless.

[QUOTE=bdbthekiller;19211605]So guys my idea was a underground lab map and so this is it . i build on this map 1 week ago it by 20% of 100% map is not finish it has no textures and no models im moment ^^ but so here the links [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10002.jpg [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10001.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10000.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10003.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10005.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10006.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10007.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10008.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10011.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10012.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10021.jpg[/url] [url]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10026.jpg[/url] [/media] more screens coming soon ^^[/QUOTE] Fixed it for you

Awful, it's just fullbright dev textures. Eugh.

Better than most fullbrights with dev textures.

also, didnt you spell the title wrong? shouldnt secred_world be corrected to sacred_world ?

ok sceens are in a hour here and thx for the fix whit my pics redbadger but when i write this [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/a...und_v10026.jpg[/media] than can you see a pic or what ? [editline]08:25PM[/editline] ok thanks i build now and have some special ideas i can build all things what you want but i need a pic :D

[QUOTE=bdbthekiller;19215015]ok sceens are in a hour here and thx for the fix whit my pics redbadger but when i write this [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/a...und_v10026.jpg[/media] than can you see a pic or what ? [editline]08:25PM[/editline] ok thanks i build now and have some special ideas i can build all things what you want but i need a pic :D[/QUOTE] Page not found for me.

hmm shit ok thx so guys the new screens are today at 8.30pm online :D

People remember, he said it's not done yet. Didn't you mean gm_secret_world instead?

yeah gm_secred_world is not done yet i have build from the map 20% of 100% XD ok so guys i got a problem so look at this pic normaly is this the street but i have a problem whit this texture also i need a new texture pls can some one make a street texture for me ? pls [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10029.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/qaf.jpg[/media]

[QUOTE=ddrl46;19228258]People remember, he said it's not done yet. Didn't you mean gm_secret_world instead?[/QUOTE] But, if a thread is posted it means it needs to be able to be criticized...otherwise, what is the point of posting. Please get light in images BEFORE taking screens. Your screenshots should looks as good as you can make them.

ok sry

You have a ton of stretched textures. Fix those, it will look much better when the lighting comes in place.

ok thx so guys the newest update so watch it :D [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10041.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10040.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10039.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10038.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10037.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10036.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10035.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10034.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10033.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10032.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10031.jpg[/media] [media]http://i973.photobucket.com/albums/ae211/thekillerjmper/gm_secred_underground_v10030.jpg[/media] now im on 25% of 100% ^^

i have thinking i made a little gameplay ^^ enjoy[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpVa0TQqIok[/media]

Hurk! :barf:

Why hello there Half-Life 1 textures! [editline]11:33PM[/editline] Oh and what are those little bits of text that pop up all over the walls? [editline]11:34PM[/editline] And btw you don't need to showcase the dynamic water particles, we all know what they're like.

The first two images have way to much wibbly stuff in them. You are using a lot of floor textures on ceilings. Misaligned textures are everywhere, and the windows need frames or make them thinner than the walls. Also the entire thing is STILL fullbright. Get some damn light in. EDIT- first impressions of the map via the video is that it looks complicated to navigate. Either simplify it or make some custom decals pointing to places of interest. Why is water running out of vents? Surely air should be running along vents. I would advise swapping the vents for pipes if you must have particle water effects.

The texturing is hideous. It's awfully blocky. It's annoyingly illogical.

Never use HL1 textures in any map that is not running GoldSrc. Also: [list]There are a lot of mismatched textures.[/list] [list]Blocky; use more interesting brushwork.[/list] [list]Fullbright; you really need lighting.[/list] [list]There is no real purpose to your map (at least not that I can see).[/list] [QUOTE=St33m;19214971]also, didnt you spell the title wrong? shouldnt secred_world be corrected to sacred_world ?[/QUOTE] I think it's actually secret_world.

[QUOTE=bdbthekiller;19232241]now im on 25% of 100% ^^[/QUOTE] It's just "25%". Percent is short for per century, meaning per hundred.

Would look a lot better with proper lighting and some furniture.

1 word. LIGHTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[QUOTE=Fhenexx;19245153]Never use HL1 textures in any map that is not running GoldSrc. Also: [list]There are a lot of mismatched textures.[/list] [list]Blocky; use more interesting brushwork.[/list] [list]Fullbright; you really need lighting.[/list] [list]There is no real purpose to your map (at least not that I can see).[/list] I think it's actually secret_world.[/QUOTE] They are part of a higher res black mesa pack. But still, they are badly used in all ways.