Here's this map I'm working on... To be honest, I think it's the first map I haven't ditched halfway through.
[IMG]http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab26/NumberYellow/city_block_doors0008.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab26/NumberYellow/city_block_doors0000.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab26/NumberYellow/city_block_doors0006.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i846.photobucket.com/albums/ab26/NumberYellow/city_block_doors0007.jpg[/IMG]
Aaand, here's a video I made a while ago. I made a lot of changes since then though. Watch out for those gunships!
[url]http://www.xfire.com/video/1e5f0c/[/url]
So, opinions? Suggestions? If you think it sucks, you should give me a way to improve it if you're feeling generous.
(If there's a really obvious problem, like the fire clipping through the fireplace, I probably know about it. This is just a beta)
Wheres the snow? Oh and the fire is clipping though the fireplace.
Place has about as much snowfall as mine
I really hope the textures are placeholder.
hey it looks pretty good so far rated artistic
The way I see it the light from the lamp post in the foreground in the first picture is starting a little under the supposed light source.
[QUOTE=laharlsblade;19733866]The way I see it the light from the lamp post in the foreground in the first picture is starting a little under the supposed light source.[/QUOTE]
Ah, yes, thank you. For some reason I get really paranoid that I will somehow move it up too high...
So, I am assuming this is going to be a Single-player map(campaign?). Right now it looks okay, a bit dull, but okay. But there are some things I want you to fix.
[URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Fixthis!.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
Look in the red square to the left. Does those windows look good? I suggest that you replace them with some normal wall textures. Because normally you would not put windows that close to a corner.
The other square indicates that you could make that building a bit more detailed(since it is were you need to go to get the rpg, hence it is important). Make it stand out naturally from the rest of the buildings. Right now it is just a block with windows and doors(this goes for some of the other buildings too).
Next image:
[URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/FixThis2!.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
Whats up with that black spot? You should really make the lights a bit smoother distributed. Random parts of the map not lighted up often confuses the player, which is not good.
Finally, that roof thing should not be that pointy. I see what you are trying to make, but that does not look that good. Lower it a bit. Also, the ground in this image is really repetitive.
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