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A month of work has finally paid off. This is my first map in Hammer, so it does have a few glitches aesthetics wise, but other than that it's functional and spacious. [IMG]http://s3.garrysmod.org/img/cache/1/0/4/5/9/5/cc71fc7518cfd3ff24e155d6518c143a.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://s3.garrysmod.org/img/cache/1/0/4/5/9/5/475fdf430257c3a607f36a97658fa367.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://s3.garrysmod.org/img/cache/1/0/4/5/9/5/6fb96266d8042cb698d92cf845625703.jpg[/IMG] Video "tour": [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezbEcOmGuGk[/url] Download: [url]http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=104595[/url]

This is actually pretty good for a first map. Keep on working on this map and add some detail. That long hall could use alot more detail, try adding some func_detail.

-Repetitive textures -Blocky -Lack of detail -Too much emptyness

[QUOTE=gh0strec0n;23489850]This is actually pretty good for a first map. Keep on working on this map and add some detail. That long hall could use alot more detail, try adding some func_detail.[/QUOTE] Uh what? You don't "add func detail" You make brushes and then make them a func detail. Func_detail isn't to assign detail objects either.

I like it, and it has quite a bit of potential. Good work son.

[QUOTE=gerbile4;23499782]Uh what? You don't "add func detail" You make brushes and then make them a func detail. Func_detail isn't to assign detail objects either.[/QUOTE] nazi. Also slightly wrong, you use func_detail on stuff that is detail, like a door frame, rails, ladders, etc. Basically, you can func_detail anything that is not touching the void, but still that is not recommended in my opinion. [editline]10:35AM[/editline] [QUOTE=NotMeh;23490211]-Repetitive textures -Blocky -Lack of detail -Too much emptyness[/QUOTE] It's a first map, instead of being a dick, why don't you tell him how to improve? Also, don't put you name in the map as a bunch of brushes. Trust me, a lot of people will troll you for that.

[QUOTE=Steak;23640223]nazi. Also slightly wrong, you use func_detail on stuff that is detail, like a door frame, rails, ladders, etc. Basically, you can func_detail anything that is not touching the void, but still that is not recommended in my opinion. [editline]10:35AM[/editline] It's a first map, instead of being a dick, why don't you tell him how to improve? Also, don't put you name in the map as a bunch of brushes. Trust me, a lot of people will troll you for that.[/QUOTE] Being his first map is not an excuse usable anymore on this forum. He gave correct feedback and was not being a dick. If the mapper does not like the feedback then he should not release the map.

[QUOTE=Terragen;23666780]Being his first map is not an excuse usable anymore on this forum. He gave correct feedback and was not being a dick. If the mapper does not like the feedback then he should not release the map.[/QUOTE] Still not telling him how to improve the map.

[QUOTE=Steak;23640223]nazi. Also slightly wrong, you use func_detail on stuff that is detail, like a door frame, rails, ladders, etc. Basically, you can func_detail anything that is not touching the void, but still that is not recommended in my opinion. [editline]10:35AM[/editline] It's a first map, instead of being a dick, why don't you tell him how to improve? Also, don't put you name in the map as a bunch of brushes. Trust me, a lot of people will troll you for that.[/QUOTE] Not correct use of the term troll.

does this map actualy have any space in it?

[QUOTE=Steak;23670177]Still not telling him how to improve the map.[/QUOTE] It tells him EXACTLY what to do. Saying repetitive textures means use more than the ones he currently has. Blocky means makes it un-blocky. Lack of detail means add more in. Too much emptyness means add more stuff in. It tells him EXACTLY what to do short and sweet. He gave him criticism, and was hardly going bad on the guy at all.

Empty

[QUOTE=Steak;23640223] It's a first map, instead of being a dick, why don't you tell him how to improve? Also, don't put you name in the map as a bunch of brushes. Trust me, a lot of people will troll you for that.[/QUOTE] Are you fucking dumb? I listed things that he could work on in his map. If he couldn't figure that out (and as a side note, neither did you) then I advise to never ever open Hammer again. ...God why do newbies always have to be THIS retarded?

[QUOTE=NotMeh;23731477]Are you fucking dumb? I listed things that he could work on in his map. If he couldn't figure that out (and as a side note, neither did you) then I advise to never ever open Hammer again. ...God why do newbies always have to be THIS retarded?[/QUOTE] because most newbies try to look as good as possible without thinking of what they're saying

decent for a fist map. Add more features and better geometry next time.

[QUOTE=NotMeh;23490211] -Too much emptyness[/QUOTE] I appreciate your input, but please keep in mind that this map was meant to have alot of space, as it was built for a BuildRP. Perhaps I gave it the incorrect prefix, but the space was meant as space to build in.

[QUOTE=Steak;23640223]It's a first map, instead of being a dick, why don't you tell him how to improve?[/QUOTE] He didn't directly tell him how to improve, but he pointed out flaws. The creator of the map will then know those flaws are things he should avoid, so it is, in a way, telling him how to improve.