Previous Thread: [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=920044"]Tentaspy 2.0[/URL]
So yeah. I failed you Facepunch. I gave in and... made a sequel. You know to what story (and if it wasn't for the search being completely borked right now, I'd link to it).
But don't let the name deceive you - this is a "normal" story, without any horrible excesses and disturbing thoughts (or at least, too disturbing).
And so, I present you, this story.
[QUOTE] [I]I am pretty sure this should not be happening, but it indeed is. Somehow. For some reason, the idea just doesn’t stay where it belongs (in deep, forgotten corner of ones mind), but tries to escape. You yourself probably guessed what it is. That’s right, the sequel for that… interesting trolling attempt? Exploration of ones fetishes (oh man, oh god, oh man)? Art (wait, what?)? I don’t really know, nor at this moment, it makes any difference. This is the first paragraph that is being created, as I type this (interestingly enough). I told myself I won’t do this, but it looks like I will. Well, damn.[/I]
Two large buildings – forts, castles of the modern age, stood across each other, with a bridge and a moat separating them. One fort was red in color, with walls outlined by wood and stone, thus making it appear in likeness of an overgrown barn. The other one had an appearance of a factory, with the bluish cement and sheets of metal covering it in the same pattern as the wood and stones covered the red fort. The moat was a dividing line between those buildings, and marked the line where one fort started and another one ended. Like a third-party diplomat, the bridge that connected both sites was neutral in color, and make-shift in appearance, contrasting from the well-made forts on the either side.
Sometimes a few people would run from one fort to another. Very rarely they would run back to their side – and almost always, with someone following. Sometimes two groups met and caused such violence, that they destroyed each other. Sometimes a lone individual passed through – and they were most likely, killed by the snipers, who were always in the battlements, on guard, and most importantly – in their own little world where the “Most dangerous game” became, but a great target practice, if anything.
But today was a rather obnoxious day – the temperature turned up so high, that even the Australia-hardened snipers, were forced to take a break. The Engineers left their sentries alone, although always in the range to save from a wild sapper that might appear at any time. The Demoman and Soldier took a day off, to see Pyro participate in one of the manliest games in existence – the rocket tennis. The Medic sat in the BLU team spawn and was refilling his syringes, with Scout annoying him to no end, just by her presence. Even after repeated attempts to make the Scout leave him alone, the Medic could do nothing to distract the girl away from him (a strange situation, considering that Scout has attention span of a goldfish). Finally, after pricking her fingers on one of the needles and accidentally injecting herself with the contents, Scout forced the Medic to throw the girl out, with the assistance of Heavy. Mind you, the Heavy liked the girl, as she always brought great energy to the team, being addicted to Bonk energy drink and all. To excuse his rudeness, he gave her a piece of his sandvich, which quickly made the Scout forgive the Heavy his actions, and to run off to see if there was anything else to do.
To her disappointment, there really wasn’t anything to do in the base – both teams were too tired, bored, or out of range to try anything. It was a perfect day to try something she might not have an equal chance at doing any other day – to infiltrate the RED base, and to get the intelligence. Finally she wouldn’t have her team whine about her simply being a transport for some papers - she was to finally prove her worth to them. And off she went, toward the overgrown barn of RED fortress.
She easily crossed the bridge, as no one was either on the battlements or at the entrance. However as she was entering the fort, her eyes met the eyes of another girl, another Scout. Confused and in equal surprise as the BLU Scout, RED Scout only initial thought was to run down and to alarm her team. The next moment brought another thought - if she was to stop an intruder by herself, she would get all the credit. BLU Scout, knowing that her opponent was just as confused, suddenly dashed off by RED Scout and down a corridor. She saw a turn to the left and jumped in it, knowing that if the RED team went into pursuit, at least they didn’t know where she was – and maybe she could have had a chance to escape. After running farther down and taking a few turns, BLU Scout stopped and looked around – the room had no other exit, beside from where she entered. The far off room where she ended up was warm, but not as much as it was outside, even with a few sunrays coming through the boarded up window that lead to the other side of the Fort. There was a lot of hay on the floor, so she presumed this was a place where the hay is stored, as after all, The Forts also doubled as storages for various goods. However, her farther examination of the room was interrupted by careful footsteps down the corridor, which caused BLU Scout to hide behind the opened door into the room. Hidden from view, BLU Scout saw the RED Scout entering the room – she probably saw that BLU Scout ran in this direction, and was now trying to find and apprehend her. Standing confused, in the middle of mostly open room, with her back to the doorframe, RED Scout was in a place just perfect for BLU Scout to get a jump on her, and to buy herself some time to escape, if the rest of the RED were not informed. As quickly as possible, BLU Scout jumped out… and had her foot hit the door, tripping onto the RED Scout, sending both of them falling down, and accidentally closing the escape door.
Both girls fell on the floor, and begun struggling to reach their weapons. Their tries were fruitless, though, as neither managed to even find their weapon, in a close proximity, as each of them were thrown all across the room, when the Scouts collided. Despite their best attempts, Scouts were stuck in a melee fight that consisted of trying to get away from the opponent to hit her and to try to get closer to the opponent, to not get hit. However, after some time, Blue Scout started to feel that her senses started to become deeper and stronger than usual. Her movements became slightly slower, but the Red Scout did not notice anything, until she accidentally moved between Blue Scouts legs, causing her to suddenly release a quiet moan and to grab the other girl in a hug, rather than to continue the fight. And although she continued to struggle, the change was in such contrast, that it was easy to identify what caused it. Red Scout understood that this was a good way to stop her opponent, and win enough time to apprehend Blue Scout.
As Red Scout continued to move in this rather embarrassing manner (it crossed her mind that if they were found, the situation would be beyond strange) the Blue Scout went from trying to fight, even in her current state, to lying down on the floor, with her legs spread out, and quietly moaning. Red Scout was also slightly aroused, but she though that it wouldn’t go out of hand, and was getting ready to finally exploit the weakness her opponent was enduring and to think of the way to take her prisoner. However, her entire plan was interrupted when Blue Scout have grabbed a hold of Red Scout and moved in closer, rubbing their breasts together. This caused the Red Scouts thoughts to blank out as she suddenly started experiencing high levels of sexual arousal.
Ever since her encounter with the Tentaspy, Red Scout found herself at times sexually aroused to the extent, she never felt before. She guessed it was from the Tentaspy’s “fluid” large amounts of which she ingested. Perhaps it was a way to bind her to it, but despite that she was very reluctant to return to the sewers for a meeting. When in such state, Red Scout would spend hours masturbating, enjoying the feeling to the last second, as she couldn’t even think well. What she could think of, during such state ranged from innocent to rather perverse. It nothing exact that induced this upon her, and once, even something as simple as entering warm shower caused Red Scout to lie on shower floor, ass up to the water currents, through most of the day. Luckily for her, none of her teammates had time to check the showers, as of that day, one of the longest battles of 2fort had commenced. And while the absence of Scout was slightly worrying to the team, various projectiles flying their way were of more concern. Masturbation did little to ease the Red Scouts arousal, and a more efficient way out would had to be found, if she was not to agree with the Tentaspy’s idea; of her entering its lair periodically.
And now, she was once again stricken by this inconvenience and now both of the girls were passionately hugging and feeling each other. Barely understanding what they are doing, both girls looked each other in the eyes for a brief moment. They saw equal tension, and that was enough reason to get their faces closer and start kissing. Just like their tongues were writhing against each other, the girls arms started to go under each others clothing. Blue started massaging Reds’ breast, while Red’s hands worked their way into Blues panties, grabbed her ass, and started feeling moving slightly up and down. The circular and linear movements have brought the girls in a trance like state for a short period of time.
Red was first to slightly snap out and her hands worked their way up unbuttoned Blues skirt, and pulled it off. Blue lowered one of her hands down and did the same. After they allowed for the first wave of lust to come out, the girls became playful. The girls interrupted their kiss for a moment to look down, and saw that their panties were soaked wet. Red pushed Blue back on a pile of hay and brought herself closer to her as well. She put her arms around Blue’s waist, and started moving up and down, rubbing her breasts against Blue’s. Blue wrapped her legs around Red and joined in. Soon, the girls were once again kissing.
As the sexual arousal increased, so did the girls perversity. Blue reached for the Red’s shirt and pulled it up, revealing a nice pair of C-cups. Red did the same to Blue, and upon lifting Blue’s shirt, found cleavage close in size to her own. Red moved slightly toward Blue, to continue their foreplay, but was surprised when Blue jumped on her to get in the position above. Blue lowered her lower body, so the girl’s groins were touching as well as breasts, and continued rubbing herself on Red. As sexual tension increased, Blue has gained more and more dominance, while Red was now the one to completely give up herself to the girl on top. Red spread her legs and started to caress Blue’s ass with her hands, as well as assisting her movements back and forth.
Finally, both of the girls reached the point where their panties were completely wet and their minds once again clouded with lust. Blue stopped moving right when her breasts were above Red’s face, giving her a chance to start licking at and then sucking on her breasts. Blue moved slightly closer and started massaging her other breast. Distracted by the stimulation, Blue did not notice that Red’s arms went her under panties, and were opening them up to pull them down. Only once Red’s fingers started to play around Blue’s vagina and asshole, did she finally notice that now, she only wore a lifted up shirt. Slightly surprised, Blue lifted herself, but fell back revealing her pussy to Red.
Red smiled and moved onto Blue, feeling that she was once again in the dominance. Her fingers started rubbing Blue’s clit, sometimes going slightly. Red also continued to lick and suck on Blue’s breasts, which in combination with her fingering, brought Blue back into the state of submission. Red started moving down the Blue’s body, until her tongue took the place of her finger, playing between Blue’s spread legs. Blue’s arms were either stimulating her breasts or petting Red whose tongue started to go deeper into her. As she started enjoying the stimulation more and more, she has begun jerking up and down much to the Red’s annoyance.
Red grabbed Blue’s leg and violently overturned her in a position where she was less disruptive. Blue started swaying back and forth, so Red’s hands grabbed her hip and pulled her down, which sat Blue on her knees and brought her ass closer to Red. Finally Red placed herself on her back and her head under Red. Red’s tongue once again, started playing with Blue, and her arms went back to fondling Blue’s ass. Blue was enjoying this more and more, her body slowly swaying back and forth, her tongue writhing in her open mouth, and her quiet moaning filling the room.
Suddenly Blue turned around and hugged Red’s legs while burying her face in Red’s pussy. Now both girls were pleasuring each other, licking deeper and occasionally fingering. While Blue was using her hands to pleasure herself and her partner, Red’s hands went into her bat bag which was now lying next to the girls, open and some of its contents fallen out. Her hand went into the lunch bag, and after a little search, came out with a banana in hand. Looking playfully and giving it a few licks, Red broke off the stick and started slowly inserting it into Blue’s pussy. Blue went out of her mind, moving her ass up, and dropping her head down, dropping her tongue out of a smiling mouth.
Red gave the banana a few licks and put her mouth around it, moving the banana back and forth, making Blue loudly moan. Finally Red turned around and inserted the rest of the banana into her own pussy, making both girls asses touch each other. Now Red has been ass up as well, and both girl begun moving their asses in and out in a unison. Girl’s held their hands together, hand in hand, sometimes releasing each other to bring their hand on to the asses, but still clinging them back, shortly.
Finally, both girls orgasmed almost synchronically and with a gasp, lied down on the floor, tired and satisfied. Both girls turned toward each other and started eating the banana, taking turn and kissing after each time they both had their turn, while lying on the ground and hugging. Both Red and Blue fell asleep before they finished the kiss after the last half of banana was shared between them. Now, their sweating, naked bodies were lying next to each other on soft hay, bathing in the sun rays that got through the boarded up windows. The wooden door was slowly creaking...
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This isn't as bad as junkies. I hope I won't get banned for too long. :ohdear:
You wrote genderbend porn fanfic of a lighthearted cartoony video game shooter. You thought up a continuation to that story.
There is no way you can say you're doing this ironically.
And why the hell are you acting all shameful about it?
"Oh gorsh look whats I dids, woopsie daisy :gay:"
Are you somehow trying to make the fact that you actually put thought and time to write two considerably long erotic fanfictions of a video game seem innocent and not completely serious?
How can you not be serious about this if you have written a story of this genre, thought about what your loaned fantasy characters should do to appear most sexually appealing to some awkward pasty nerds who actually enjoy your story (and to yourself), then having wrote a [B]continuation[/B] to your fucking deluded haze of steaming fiction?
You seriously need to think about what the hell you're gonna do with things like this and if you're lying to yourself about being ironic when writing this kind of shit.
Lovely.
I am 12 what is this.
[quote]the temperature turned up so high, that even the [b]Australia-hardened[/b] snipers, were forced to...[/quote]
[img]http://i.somethingawful.com/forumsystem/emoticons/emot-fappery.gif[/img]
I'm not even sure what that means, but man is it [highlight]hot[/highlight].
:shlick:
:shlick:
[QUOTE=JGillo;24152451]I am 12 what is this.[/QUOTE]
-apparently it's a joke I haven't heard of-
What is this I don't even.
[QUOTE=Kikka-2;24154877]See even 12-year olds think you're fucking retarded[/QUOTE]
Someone does not get the reference....
[QUOTE=gufu;24151792]So yeah. I failed you Facepunch. I gave in and... made a sequel. You know to what story (and if it wasn't for the search being completely borked right now, I'd link to it).
But don't let the name deceive you - this is a "normal" story, without any horrible excesses and disturbing thoughts (or at least, too disturbing).
And so, I present you, this story.
This isn't as bad as junkies. I hope I won't get banned for too long. :ohdear:[/QUOTE]
Get out.
[editline]02:26PM[/editline]
These are more retarded if not just as retarded as MW2 in general.
[QUOTE=EvilShadow777;24155880]Someone does not get the reference....[/QUOTE]
Sorry for not lurking FP like a lurky lurker.
[QUOTE=Kikka-2;24157428]Sorry for not lurking FP like a lurky lurker.[/QUOTE]
The "im 12 and what is this" is not a "FP joke"
:colbert:
Nor is it not-bannable, since memes are bannable.
[QUOTE=Dr.Scrake;24157457]The "im 12 and what is this" is not a "FP joke"
:colbert:[/QUOTE]
Well I hadn't heard of it, sorry for not having a master's degree in Internet Lore and Subcategories
Oh, drama.
[QUOTE=Kikka-2;24152031]
You seriously need to think about what the hell you're gonna do with things like this and if you're lying to yourself about being ironic when writing this kind of shit.[/QUOTE]
Well, someone is taking this too seriously.
[QUOTE=gufu;24164067]Oh, drama.[/QUOTE]
Way to come back at your own smelly turd being a huge smugface.
[editline]09:08PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=gufu;24164067]Oh, drama.
Well, someone is taking this too seriously.[/QUOTE]
I'm just telling you that writing something like this unironically is really creepy and makes you look like an awkward tool. Even ironically it'd be really stupid.
Do you even realize you're getting the fame of "that guy who wrote that creepy shitty pseudoporn fanfic about a videogame" when you post something like this?
[QUOTE=Kikka-2;24164097]Way to come back at your own smelly turd being a huge smugface.[/QUOTE]
Yup, he's angry.
[QUOTE=Kikka-2;24164097]
Do you even realize you're getting the fame of "that guy who wrote that creepy shitty pseudoporn fanfic about a videogame" when you post something like this?[/QUOTE]
Can't beat Junkie.
[QUOTE=littleicyman;24171902][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umDr0mPuyQc&feature=related[/media][/QUOTE]
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aE_rYAwD3ds[/media]
10 boxes and nothing else? Facepunch is growing rather bland in it's opinions.
I think you need to masturbate
Oh my Gufu. Why?!
[QUOTE=Kikka-2;24164097]
Do you even realize you're getting the fame of "that guy who wrote that creepy shitty pseudoporn fanfic about a videogame" when you post something like this?[/QUOTE]
shudap :c
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