EPISODE 1: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wtrKcPrkmCQ[/url]
I have created a new series on Minecraft about a guy that is trapped inside of a maze, and he has to survive to get out.
Here is the link to the main page: [url]http://www.minecraftforum.net/viewtopic.php?f=1035&t=343439&p=4731781#p4731781[/url]
PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! Please tell me your thoughts about the series!
I think it's spelled Trapped for life
Needs more narration. and it needs to be more cinematic, also if it's a jail where are the security guards. And i'm still not sitting on the edge of my seat, it was pretty boring to be honest. Add some spice to it
[QUOTE=Sir Spicy Buns;29766921]I think it's spelled Trapped for life
Needs more narration. and it needs to be more cinematic, also if it's a jail where are the security guards. And i'm still not sitting on the edge of my seat, it was pretty boring to be honest. Add some spice to it[/QUOTE]
I can't make security guards.. its single player Minecraft and can't really make it more "cinematic" in minecraft, because you can't setup cameras or anything.
But thanks for the input.
You can do all of that if you host your own minecraft mp server on your own machine.
Needs more mandril maze
work on your fake emotions more
[QUOTE=Saza;29768393]work on your fake emotions more[/QUOTE]
Reminds me of Seananners in a way. In his videos, Seananners always has this fake "OH MY GOD THIS IS REAL EMOTION" voice when he 'discovers' something.
it was a good idea, but the voice acting ruined it. You keep doing the "quiet yell because i dont want to wake anyone up or people to hear me" voice.
actually talk normal volume, yell when needed, and try to convey your emotions more realistically.
[QUOTE=Doomish;29768437]Reminds me of Seananners in a way. In his videos, Seananners always has this fake "OH MY GOD THIS IS REAL EMOTION" voice when he 'discovers' something.[/QUOTE]
yeah
"oh crap oh crap I don't think I can jump.... 1.... 2.... 3... OHOOFHEOFH"WEIHOIHFEFGE oh I made it"
to be said in a sarcastic not scared voice at all.
