Hello FP I have made a story about Minecraft, and I hope you like it.
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Chapter One: The Dark Times[/B]
The humans have invaded Minecrafta. It started out as just a few scavengers, and loners, but then it evolved. Huge human kingdoms began to spring up, and they took over our lands. Sure we tried to fight back alone, but it almost never works. Not against those huge kingdoms. We did not have a government we were just sent from the Nether to try, and destroy the human race, and live a healthy life. How could we? Most of the world has been taken over. How could we? Plus those pathetic humans have been looking into the Nether! We have no place to hide. We have no place to call home anymore. They took it all. NO MORE! No more with this terror! No more living in the darkness! THIS is the story of the enemy mob's rise to power. This is the story of their greatness!
My name is Klev I am a Creeper. I live on the Livelong Flatlands. It's a pretty simple life, and I am young so I have not even exploded for the first time yet. The Flatlands are one of the last free territory's in this area. The Diamond Kingdom looks over everything else near here. Savages. Just cold hearted savages! Suddenly my train of thought was cut off by someone yelling at me.
"KLEV KLEV!" It was Rosd my friend. He was standing on a hill behind me.
"What do you want Rosd?"
"Hooshku is calling a meeting for the Livelong Flatland Creepers! Come on man! It's about to start!"
Interesting they never call meetings. Following him I could see we were coming up to a huge cave. It had no name, because it was new. A few human bandits carved it out with tnt. Why? I don't know, but a lot of us live in it now. As we got closer the sound of talking hit my ears.
"Walk faster they may have already started!" Rosd yelled.
After picking up speed we both sat on a rock formation, and found that a creeper was sitting on a very high rock. Hooshku I thought. He was always a powerfreak.
"Everyone Everyone! Listen to me! STOP TALKING! I SAID SHUT UP!" After everyone began to quite down he continued.
"NOW! As we all know the Diamond Kingdom has been cutting into our lands. Taking it all! Well we have been only taking out some loners, and not taking out the bigger problem here! The Diamond Kingdom we sh-" Hooshku was cut off by another creeper.
"Oh yeah? How do you suspect we could take on the greatest, and most powerful human kingdoms there are? HHHHMMMMM?"
"I was getting to that! So I have decided, and already made plans to make a new government. Like a kingdom. For us! The Creeper Kingdom! Because we had not government we were not able to take on larger enemies like humans, but if we are able to make some allegiances with other mobs we may be able to destroy the DK! (Diamond Kingdom) Yes you heard me allegiances. We can make friends with the other human hostile mobs out there! Skeletons Spiders Zombies you name it! Even passive mobs could be our spies! We shall be greater then the Diamond Kingdom! Greater then the gods themselves! We shall rule the world once again!"
Cheers rang out from the audience, and me.
"THEN IT'S SETTLED!" He yelled out from the noise. "FROM THIS DAY FORWARD WE ARE KNOWN AS THE CREEPER KINGDOM!"
The Cheering just got louder after that.
[B] Chapter Two: The Webs[/B]
After what seemed like 5 hours of cheering Hooshku finally spoke up.
"Okay Creepers! If we are going to do this right you all need to shut your smokeholes! We need to get the first issue out of the list. Spiders! The Creeper Kingdom needs to get zombies, and skeletons for mining, and tool making, and in order to do that we need arms. So as we all know we need the Spider's climbing skills to get on top of mountain Corckanhra to get to the old abandoned mineshaft."
He looked at the entrance to the cave.
"It still looks like it' full fledged daylight, so we should get going. They won't suspect Creepers getting out of the darkness in day. We might as well get 20 Creeps in case we run into Diamond soldiers. Who's up for it? Raise your ha- oh right uhh come to the rock over here."
I had no intentions of going after all I had no battle experience, and there was no telling what they could encounter, but Rosd headbutted me in the side.
"Well come on man!"
"What?" I said surprised. He could not possibly be thinking about going on a possible suicide trip.
"I am not going on a mission!"
"Oh come on you coward! Don't you want to feel some adrenaline? Don't you want to explode for the first time? Cooommmmeee on if you don't go I am going to!"
Dang it! Rosd just has to pull the guilt trip on me!
"Ffffinnnneeee, but if I die I hope everyone places the blame on you."
We both stumbled to the base of the huge rock. Along with a few others.
"Is 20 there? I can't see you are all below me. Ah I think we have 23 that's better, so shall we get going?"
He walked down the natural steps, and met with us.
"Come on then we have no time to lose!"
After walking on cold dark stone for a minute our feet stepped in cool green grass. It felt much better then stone, but we don't go in grass often unless you are looking to kill somebody. I could see tree, and huge plains as far as the eye could see. Even some pigs, and sheep were frolicking about like morons. They would just stare at us as we walked by. Must have never seen a group of creepers before. Soon enough Rosd hit me in the side.
"Hey buddy look at those huge mountains over there! Those must be where the skeletons, and zombies hide."
"Yeah it is, but we need spiders if we are going to crawl up there that's why we are on this mission."
As we were walking I noticed that the grass kept getting more moist, and more moist. That's when I realized we were in a swamp.
"Are you sure we are going the right way?!" I yelled over the crowd to Hooshku.
"Bahh yes to get to the Spider cave you need to go through the Kelptsave Swamp. After all the cave is in there!"
He was right! Soon we came up to a pretty big hill, and you could clearly see a huge cave inside of it.
"Are you sure it's safe?" I heard someone say.
"Of course it's safe Spiders live in it yea idiot." Hooshku scrowled.
A huge tower of rocks blocked the middle of the entrance so it looks like it had two ginormous entrances. You could see the place littered with skeletons of both spider, and human.
"This place looks like something just horrible happened here."
The cave also had a horrible stench. Plus there were webs all over the walls.Going up closer you could see eggs. Yes eggs!
"Do they just leave their young out for anyone to take? Hey look at that! A few cows, and pigs are cocooned in webs up there!
I looked up at the ceiling. Holy crap! Look at that! There were wrapped up animals everywhere!
Suddenly we all were given a fright. Out of the darkness you could see red eyes.
Humans?!
And that's chapter one, and two people. I will be posing more. If it's good that is.
Also people give me suggestions, and Criticism. I will need it to keep going.
Interesting story so far. I'll keep an eye out for more chapters, if you're planning to continue this.
In my opinion chapter two should be renamed to "The Wall".
Don't ask of my reasoning. But it fits it quite well.
[QUOTE=TheSporeGA;31416482] It's a pretty simple life, and [b]I am young so I have not even exploded for the first time yet.[/b] [/QUOTE]
I think this was the best part.
You like it don't you.
Fairly nice, but if I saw a group of 23 creepers walking across a Plains biome, talking to each other, I'd probably quit Minecraft forever.
[QUOTE=TheSporeGA;31416482]You could see the place littered with skeletons of both [B]spider[/B], and human.[/QUOTE]
um
[QUOTE=Loofiloo;31443904]um[/QUOTE]
Um what?
Take Minecraft pictures to accompany the story the next time, please.
[QUOTE=Burgervich;31455631]Um what?[/QUOTE]
Spiders don't have bones. They have an exoskeleton
Spiders have a very different anatomy anatomy from what one usually encounters, they only have muscles for contracting their limbs. They use a hydraulic system to move their legs out. The loss of fluid pressure is what causes their legs to curl up when they die.
I've seen spider-shaped husk sort of things that are completely white, kind of like "fossilized" if that's a good way to describe it. What causes it?
minecraft fiction = shit 99% of the time
I'd like to see you come up with something better then. :v:
[QUOTE=Biotoxsin;31462409]Spiders have a very different anatomy anatomy from what one usually encounters, they only have muscles for contracting their limbs. They use a hydraulic system to move their legs out. The loss of fluid pressure is what causes their legs to curl up when they die.[/QUOTE]
Who ever said that Minecraft spiders were the same as Real Life spiders? I mean I don't know about you, but I have never seen a spider about half the size of me.
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