Hi folks,
Just finished a comedy Portal 2 fan film, set after the co-op ending. Hope you like it!
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qeYOBiSSeE&fmt=22[/media]
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qeYOBiSSeE&fmt=22[/url] (YT link)
Let me know what you think.
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To be Honest, I didn't find this funny, I am not even sure how this is suppose to be comedy, also I didn't understand GLaDOS. What did she say?
Some of the camera angles were strange, and didnt appeal to me, and to be honest i didnt laugh (was i meant to ? I guess because its a comedy) I didnt mind some of the first person shots though.
But by ALL MEANS dont stop making these because of some facepunchers opinion. Keep at it.
"player.biker_reactionnegative02", poor guy. If they offered cake I will [I]not[/I] fall for it, remember the messages on the walls in Portal 1? They said "the cake is a lie"
That was pretty entertaining for me, good work
Was fine. Didn't really laugh, but it was interesting and kept me watching. The first person camera could use some work though, he jumps in with his knees high and the next thing you know hes entering the portal face first. There was also a slight jump/lagg with the hands.
I'd recommend getting a better camera / recorder, it's a bit easier to work with higher quality footage.
Thanks for the feedback. I did have an alt shot of a more realistic jump, but it just didn't seem as entertaining.
I didn't really find it funny at all but I definitely thought the special effects were well done.
Try working on your writing, as I didn't really get the impression that it was supposed to be funny.
I liked it and I hope to see more from you in the future, just keep working at it.
Take into account that I'm thinking about what you could make more than the flaws of this since the problems were more stuff like the writing and not something like having terrible effects.
it's pretty bad.:tinfoil:
Probably should've got him to kinda dive into the portal, just because it'd make the first person part a little more believable.
It wasn't particularly funny, but it was still pretty neat. I'd love to see a bit more like this, only maybe a little more polished (especially in the voice department). Perhaps you should get an actual person to say GLaDOS's lines and then use an editor to make them sound more robotic, because it was quite hard to understand what she was saying.
Also, the shouting voice from the crowd could do with being a little clearer.
I actually found it kinda funny (I thought the Behind the Music bit was clever), but I think the GLaDOS voice could be way easier to understand. Is she saying something about "money required to lure human to certain death"?
[QUOTE=Neo Kabuto;31292231]Is she saying something about "money required to lure human to certain death"?[/QUOTE]
I don't know but that makes sense.
That's what it says, yeah. Thinking I'd better subtitle her!
[editline]23rd July 2011[/editline]
Done
I liked the ending with Glados. Well done! It was a bit odd at times but keep at it.
I enjoyed it. Wasn't very comical but I enjoyed it as a video. I'd like to watch another.
Wasn't really funny but very well made, love the special effects. Make some more, maybe get someone better to write it or go in a less comical direction?
Nicely done and a nice concept, however the guy seemed like he was really drunk or something
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