Follow up thread about my game review blog

[TheTrac3]

Hi,

I won't bother you with my reviews no more, but I need to know if I have improved my indie game review quality.

Here's my new review: [URL="http://exorte.com/review/float/"]http://exorte.com/review/float/[/URL]

And last thread about my first review: [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1140237"]http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1140237[/URL]

I tried to implement as much of your suggestions as I could, but there's always place for more.

Another question is what should I do to bring more readers to my blog? I believe that I can't do nothing because they won't magically come to me by themselves. Maybe there are some bloggers that can speak from their experience?

Thanks in advance.