• What would be a good metaphor for this?
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Lying alone in a dark house knowing there is a intruder downstairs, Micheal felt fear and anger rise in him like [I]something[/i]. It's pretty stupid but I am fascinated by metaphors and poetry - always have been. A little stuck on this one, it's for a short story I am writing.
prey getting hunted or like a dog who has a intruder on his territory.(try to make it sound more poetic)
Like some sort of a reverse waterfall. Also, the first part of the sentence is in the present, and the second part is the past. What.
there is none. that would be a [I]simile[/I]
Accidentally wrote metaphor it's a simile - my bad. Oh and cheers Suttles, I owe you one.
like frodo hiding from a ring wraith
[QUOTE=iatealawnmower;18789200]Accidentally wrote metaphor it's a simile - my bad. Oh and cheers Suttles, I owe you one.[/QUOTE] No problem! Which one did you choose?
[QUOTE=Suttles;18789228]No problem! Which one did you choose?[/QUOTE] I chose like a wild dog who spots an intruder on his territory. __ Do you do poetry?
like the liquid part of ketchup always rises up to the top so when you go to squirt it out the first thing that comes out of the bottle is red water and it gets pretty annoying.
[QUOTE=iatealawnmower;18789287]I chose like a wild dog who spots an intruder on his territory. __ Do you do poetry?[/QUOTE] Some times when I am bored.
like a large, throbbing erect penis
[QUOTE=pie_is_good;18789300]like the liquid part of ketchup always rises up to the top so when you go to squirt it out the first thing that comes out of the bottle is red water and it gets pretty annoying.[/QUOTE] I fucking hate that. It turns me off the ketchup.
[QUOTE=iatealawnmower;18789388]I fucking hate that. It turns me off the ketchup.[/QUOTE] I agree.
[QUOTE=iatealawnmower;18789388]I fucking hate that. It turns me off the ketchup.[/QUOTE] That's why I always wait till a couple of other people use it first.
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