fighting my last battle in a field with bomb shells all around, my ears ringing, my gun shooting, my head aching and my wounds bleeding.
all the while I can only think of my last moment..dieing heroically or dieing uncared for.
I see my life, flash before my eyes, all those memories..all those times that I had won and lost battles or shared a beer with a friend having a good time. still my head aches and my wounds bleed, but I see a whole company of my comrades to retake the land that I was fighting so hard for, now as I sit in the mud, dieing because of a lucky shot to my heart.
one of which is to never be healed, I take my last breath knowing my efforts to hold the position paid off, and then I wait to respawn.
:froggonk:
THIS one day i shot a dude in the face the end
my cat puked on me
ya didn't expect that last part now didja?
I just read the first sentence then I skipped to the end
really though tell me, did it make you cry then laugh oooor what?
It was rather dull, didn't really make me do anything. Sorry.
did you read it all the way?
No, because it was all horribly written.
like this for example im typing lol look at my story a dog once farted.
xd lol i kill dogs and then i eat chicken
damnit! it was supposed to be a really deep and moving story and then BAM instant funny.
i have one of the greatest stories known to mankind.
I was playing tf2 saturday night. the end.
Would've been funnier if you were holding a comrade who as badly injured until he took his last breath, then you cried out stood up and got shot in the head by some snipers.
Then you respawned.
Nah, it still wouldn't have been funny, these kind of jokes suck.
:(
With more punctuation, grammar, and descriptiveness i guess it would be a sub-par story.
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