• Lets write a movie script
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Lets write a movie script and I'll direct it into an actual video/series/whatever the fuck we come up with?! I'll contribute and update on the original post as we go. OKAY lets start. Setting: American Ghetto Suburbs Go. [editline]26th September 2011[/editline] brb college
Story: A band of a combination between rich and poor kids combine to put a mean bike repairs man out of business. First by attempting vandalism, then opening their own bike repair shop.
(By the end, however, they realise they've become the one thing they hated the most.)
-snip I am late-
Main Character: Jorge Borbopo, a 16 year old, of Mexican ethnicity, who lives with a single father.
Companion: Sydney Krish, a 9 year old best friend of Jorge, who has no parents but was never sent to an orphanage, so secretly lives with Jorge and sleeps under his bed. He is very talkative and gets excited easily, but is an expert at math, physics, and other academics. He helps Jorge through his tough time at school, but needs help too with social awkwardness and Jorge being his only friend.
It's a snowy morning, the camera remains focused between two houses while the audience hears various ambient sounds of the city. Suddenly a dog walks into the scene from the left and then goes behind a trash can. After a few seconds the dog comes out from behind the trash can and exits from where it entered. The camera slowly turns to the right and pans towards the garbage can to look behind it and there in the snow, written in what is presumed to be piss, are the words, "Live to be danged."
This is going to turn out just like the 3 word story: dicks dicks gay anus
Somewhere, there has to be an italian mobster type.
There need to be a gay black guy
[QUOTE=Mr.face;32496315]There need to be a gay black guy[/QUOTE] Soon, this shall be a carbon copy of The Wire. Which, actually wouldn't be too bad.
[QUOTE=bIgFaTwOrM12;32496016]It's a snowy morning, the camera remains focused between two houses while the audience hears various ambient sounds of the city. Suddenly a dog walks into the scene from the left and then goes behind a trash can. After a few seconds the dog comes out from behind the trash can and exits from where it entered. The camera slowly turns to the right and pans towards the garbage can to look behind it and there in the snow, written in what is presumed to be piss, are the words, "Live to be danged."[/QUOTE] After some more interesting shots with credits over them. The camera cuts to Jorge and Sydney, using old trash can lids to slide down a snowy hill.
As they go down the hill, two children from the suburbs are racing beside them on real sleighs. It turns into a 20 seconds racing scene, resulting in a tie, they begins fighting over who won. Before it turns ugly, the mean bike store owner comes in, yells at them and takes the suburban children's sleighs and Jorge and Sydney's lids. All of the children glare at the dusty shop window saying 'Klaus' bike repair' in faint neon. Looking at the silhouette of the old man slamming the sleighs and lids on a counter and cursing to himself.
Okay so I had this thread idea in my head a while ago cause I couldn't get any ideas on what to film next.. so I quickly posted this went to class for 4 hours and came back expecting dumb ratings and gay porn [editline]26th September 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=bIgFaTwOrM12;32496016]It's a snowy morning, the camera remains focused between two houses while the audience hears various ambient sounds of the city. Suddenly a dog walks into the scene from the left and then goes behind a trash can. After a few seconds the dog comes out from behind the trash can and exits from where it entered. The camera slowly turns to the right and pans towards the garbage can to look behind it and there in the snow, written in what is presumed to be piss, are the words, "Live to be danged."[/QUOTE] Good because it probably wont be final until the snow comes anyways.
There needs to be a bitch that calls the protagonist a monster and let's the protagonist down emotionally
Then they make up with steamy hot sex [sp]we're making a porno now[/sp]
This could turn out well.
Giant robots fighting dinosaur zombies
Can you somehow work in Snape killing Dumbledore, please? Even if its a character watching that scene on the television.
Jorge Borbopo forms a gang in order to vandalize the mean bike shop owner's store, which fails, so they resort to making a business.
Jorge Borbopo's best friend, Nicholas, who is a turtle, overdoses on seaweed.
ANYWAYS (ignoring trolls) [camera view facing Klaus' Bike Repair and the kids from across the street, slowly panning left to where JORGE and SYDNEY stand, off screen. You can hear their conversation.] JORGE: [voice is kind of slow and dumb-sounding, like Pedro from Napoleon Dynamite] Man, that's just not right. I bet those kids payed money for those. Actually, thier parents probably payed money for those and they worked at their jobs to get them for Christmas so their kids could sled and have fun and not be so sad. [by now you can see them talking] SYDNEY: [sort of hyperactive but not as sympathetic as JORGE] Yeah. Hey, want to get some tacos from that awesome taco vendor guy? [small pause] JORGE: Sure. [cut to JORGE and SYDNEY sitting and eating a taco. It is as if they just ended a conversation and this is an awkward pause in between.] [editline]27th September 2011[/editline] also, maybe you should've put this on the Creationism Corner.
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