I made the first half of this map a time ago and though I'd finish it (First map I ever done) though I have not added any resources, rocks.. Ect..
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So, any improvements besides rocks and resources?
A river
[editline]07:01PM[/editline]
and a bridge beetwen those 2 cliffs
Those underground concrete tunnels are tiny, make them bigger. I don't think any infantry could fit in there unless it was made by some weird tiny alien race.
I like the chasm, not too many of those around sadly.
chasm would offer a great point of division for a team match, and think maybe a broken rope bridge hanging would look cool there
the caved in hallway thing is overdone and makes no sense in it's positioning, plus as already said waay to small
I was gonna go for a broken/old/rusty bridge..
The tunnels where created by a race of rare-miniture-space-traveling-dwarfs-of-doom some milion years ago
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You figured it out :D
I know now. :v:
[editline]10:22PM[/editline]
Oh and, I'm gonna add a bridge.
[QUOTE=PhoenixRSA;18967798]Those underground concrete tunnels are tiny, make them bigger. I don't think any infantry could fit in there unless it was made by some weird tiny alien race.[/QUOTE]
Are you not the guy with the huge penis cannon army?
Nope, I'm the Korrelian Order guy.
[editline]01:28AM[/editline]
You are thinking of Trifon.
Oh, ok. Its because the supposedly small size of the map. My guys fit!
No, I was talking about the concrete tunnels. The only thing that will fit in there is an infection army.
more color and detail.
As I said I have only made the basics, I'm working on rocks, resources, more detail.
[editline]12:42PM[/editline]
Oh and, about the tunnels, I just felt like putting something down there..
They're not meant for walking in at all, unless you got very tiny spirites.
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I added some detail (Rocks, oil, hard dirt..) and a sucky broken rope bridge.
That bridge kicks ass.
Should I move/remove the concrete bunker thing?
[editline]04:38PM[/editline]
Thanks, I think the ropes connecting the planks and top rope look wierd though.
I think you should make it a tad bigger
Why, as I said before, the tunnel was created by..
"a race of rare-miniture-space-traveling-dwarfs-of-doom some milion years ago"
..and is not really made for big dudes, it's also not meant for walking on, as you can see in in it's condition.
O right, but i think you should put the end of the tunnel next to the chasm, itd look kinda cool
Would make sense, I'm gonna add that, anything more?
Grass... fish?
Grass would look kinda weird when the whole map's made out of old dirt?
[editline]04:53PM[/editline]
I'll think about fishes though.
The underground tunnels look odd, I know it's not meant for walking on but they look out of place.
I love the bridge though.
Since it's like an old abandoned island, maybe add like a ruined castle next to the rope bridge.
Maybe some lava deep down for good effect.
I added an old near-colapsed building also, the lava will be a good idea, adding.
On another note, am I the only one who thinks the rope bridge looks wierd? :geno:
... Yup, it looks amazing
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I think it's more or less done now.
Apart from the sucky lava that is.
Use a bit more orange on the lava. Also how about some small dead trees or bushes, to add to the dead island effect.
I knew I was missing something..
I think you should add some rare-miniture-space-traveling-dwarfs-of-doom corpses!
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