• One of my songs, just wanted to share and get opinions.
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Hey MGR, I recently wrote this song, and this is one of my first that has come together pretty nicely. I know it's not anything too fancy, but I feel like it's pretty catchy. Anyway, check it out, it has somewhat of a long intro before it really gets into the meat of the song. [media]http://soundcloud.com/andrewglesener/air-1[/media]
Liking the intro so far, good clean sound. The synth that comes in at :28 doesn't feel like it fits in too much, sound and melody wise. The arp in 1:12 fits with the rest a little better, but tone it down a little more so that fits into the mix. The percussion is also pretty lacking, spice it up some. This song has a lot of potential but it needs more work first. There's a lot of room for growth.
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