Hey everyone, just thought I'd post something I've just made here since my last song 'VY Canis Majoris' got a really good response. :v:
This is basically my first try at making something remotely 'heavy' in a sense, because I'm used to producing relatively mellow dubstep/electronica etc.
Anyway, enough chit-chat:
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3mvSo2ZRho[/media]
Please give me as much feedback as you can, and keep it in your mind that this is my first attempt at something like this. :D
Cheers everyone. :)
Datsik feels
i liked it
pretty good in the filth department, but a little too repetitive and lacking in progression. production quality is A++.
The drums are way too simple, I literally think you just had it going kick snare the entire time, like no mix up at all. 2:12 is the only time I think I didn't hear it exactly kick, snare.
Should also remove the modern talking sounding synths, and like the guy said before me, needs a progression perhaps, instead of just ambient noise intro and then after the first drop ambient noise buildup to the next drop. I also believe I'm hearing a Mario death sample.
[QUOTE=Cruma;38996683]The drums are way too simple, I literally think you just had it going kick snare the entire time, like no mix up at all. 2:12 is the only time I think I didn't hear it exactly kick, snare.
Should also remove the modern talking sounding synths, and like the guy said before me, needs a progression perhaps, instead of just ambient noise intro and then after the first drop ambient noise buildup to the next drop. I also believe I'm hearing a Mario death sample.[/QUOTE]
Thanks a bunch for the feedback. :v:
I was a little stuck in terms of progression so I kind of just got lazy and dropped it I guess.
Same with the drums. I usually mix it up a little with hats and rides but any percussion I added kind of sounded a little too complicated.
Also with the modern talking, I'm pretty sure that is just me and my love for anything remotely modern talking-ish. :D
(Some of my favourites track are: [B]I Love You - Rusko[/B] and [B]Police in Helicopter - Numa Crew[/B])
As with the Mario sample, could you tell me where you think you heard it because I don't know what you mean. :v:
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