• My Poetry (Rather Deep)
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It's good to read poetry that actually Rhymes for once, my buddy, who is a poet's work is basically just random spontaneous prose. It's pretty good, but remember you don't have to stick to a rhyming couplets scheme, you can use alternate rhyme and half rhyme.
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"My Poetry (Rather Deep)" If you're going to call it deep you might as well deliver. I found it to be unbearably trite, and it was painfully obvious where you tried to make it rhyme.
[QUOTE=BurnBlackJay;24490763]:emo:[/QUOTE] Not really, i have a different outlook on life :h:
Only way that, what seems to have rhymes made by 11 year old, can be deep is if you live in a valley or some shit.
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