• Criticise My FL Studio Skills
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I don't even know what genre this is. [media]http://soundcloud.com/andreasvennstr-m/out-chill[/media] All comments appreciated.
I like it. Great job. :buddy:
Thanks, man :sax:
This soundtrack is so good i am so impressed i was not paid to say this
i dunno the parts with that techno synth or whatever could use a little more bass but HOLY SHIT that acoustic guitar sounds sexy as shit
what vst did you use for the guitar? its fucking sexy sounding.
Comments as I listen. Percussion seems a bit funky, I'm not really sure what it is counting. Could use more of a lead into the second verse. There really isn't anything being added in the second verse and chorus and it makes it seem kind of unneeded/unwarranted. Some tension would really help this song out. I'm not sure where that synth sound fits in but it is really out of place and sounds like it on top of everything else. I don't understand the rational between going to this synth type part, it seems so random, forced, and out of place. Where you started echoing there wasn't nearly enough tension to support that, and there wasn't enough tension to go back into verse. Most of the parts sounded pretty good, but they need to be connected better, and you need to create some tension because otherwise your song is a flat lining as for as excitement goes.
[QUOTE=tehperzon;28942932]what vst did you use for the guitar? its fucking sexy sounding.[/QUOTE] DirectWave [QUOTE=Pepin;28943178]Comments as I listen. Percussion seems a bit funky, I'm not really sure what it is counting. Could use more of a lead into the second verse. There really isn't anything being added in the second verse and chorus and it makes it seem kind of unneeded/unwarranted. Some tension would really help this song out. I'm not sure where that synth sound fits in but it is really out of place and sounds like it on top of everything else. I don't understand the rational between going to this synth type part, it seems so random, forced, and out of place. Where you started echoing there wasn't nearly enough tension to support that, and there wasn't enough tension to go back into verse. Most of the parts sounded pretty good, but they need to be connected better, and you need to create some tension because otherwise your song is a flat lining as for as excitement goes.[/QUOTE] I'm going to add some piano to the second and final verse. And maybe switch the synth part with some sort of piano solo. (With the verse chords?)
This belongs in the Creationism Corner, but whatever. It's not that bad. The guitar VST is pretty high quality.
Nice song dude!
The guitar sounds insanely good.
Cool song bro.
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