• A drawing I would like critiqued
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I've been trying to draw without referances and also get human anatomy right, granted the picture is pretty shitty but I would like to know roughly where my errors are [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/3196/imag0058x.jpg[/img]
I can tell that the man's neck is too wide, and the woman's arms look like toothpicks.
And there's me thinking i'd get some real criticism
[QUOTE=sk8a13;24703371]And there's me thinking i'd get some real criticism[/QUOTE] Uh... Well it wasn't delivered in the nicest of ways but it kind of is real criticism. The neck is a bit too thick, the woman's arms are a bit too thin. Don't ask if you don't like the answer.
The overall shape of the man's face is wrong, other than that it is just sizing issues.
Well, I'll give it a shot. Yes, the man's neck is too thick. Men's necks aren't as thin or dainty as women's but it also shouldn't be as wide as the head. Necks are constructed so that they fit right into your skull, so the neck would be slightly smaller than the head. The woman's arms are too thin, and her midriff is too long. All I can really think of right now. For realism references I go to corbis.com...you'd have to pay to download high-res images but I just go into the gallery, type keywords, find a reference, and have the picture open in another tab so I can come back to it when I need it. As always, just keep practicing! That's the only way to improve. I hope this was helpful. :)
[QUOTE=sk8a13;24703371]And there's me thinking i'd get some real criticism[/QUOTE] are you dumb he gave you real criticism
I've seen worse.
Thanks for the feedback. Yes I know it was real criticism, I just didn't expect him to be a dick about it
[QUOTE=sk8a13;24705671]Thanks for the feedback. Yes I know it was real criticism, I just didn't expect him to be a dick about it[/QUOTE] this is why you dont go to facepunch for criticism
[QUOTE=sk8a13;24705671]Thanks for the feedback. Yes I know it was real criticism, I just didn't expect him to be a dick about it[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=Mystery Penguin;24702353]I can tell that the man's neck is too wide, and the woman's arms look like toothpicks.[/QUOTE] How does that sound anywhere remotely mean?
Only just now realising i've read it wrong... been up all night
What did you read it as?
You pussy he wasn't even close to mean. Just wait until 3v3ryb0dy gets here.
'sup?
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24709027]'sup?[/QUOTE] You're doing it wrong!
The overall quality is quite shite, seeing as the hair is lazily done and more closely resebles bent paperclips on magnetized cranium, face center line and circle still being visible, collar being like a tube drawn by a 2 year old and sketch lines visible in places and the doorframe being crooked beyond reason. Also you have serious problems with overall proportions and anatomy - that slut has her ass missing and her hands are tiny, the mans neck is like a tunnel for trains and shoulders are like a landingpad for the said trains, if they ever are to sprout wings. It's overall very, very, very undetailed and bland and boring if not count the face of the main clot. The woman is very undetailed boring and even her crotch area is making her look like a paper cutout. Sure pose is imganiative, but then you notice the lone shoe attatched to her foot and go all :psyduck:. There is no shading what so ever to be considered with. I'd say you best relook your tutorials on proportions, anatomy and draw bit more from life and don't be afraid to use the ruler, if you know you can't draw to save your life. Also learn how the lineart is produced, the primary sketch lines musn't be visible in the final, unless you go for that style. And you have a long way to go before you can get away with that.
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