Game for Vultures - A man is trapped in a hospital then something something elephant man
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I'd love some criticism on this, and I'd like to know if it's good enough for me to continue it.
It's very much a collection of stories and ideas I wrote while drugged up in a hospital, so that may explain the slightly disjointed structure.
Thanks in advance!
First of all, I love the story and the inspiration behind it, I've been in the same situation before and have tried to do similar works. Unfortunately, I haven't been able to force some sort of event that would allow me to experience this dynamic. I am intent on reading it, and I'll be posting again soon.
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