"See you in the Nightosphere" - New original Electronic song!
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I've been working on this track for a bit now and I wanted to release so I could get some feedback maybe. I didn't put Work In Progress in the title because I think it's pretty close to being finished. I'd just liked to get some feedback before I can officially stop working on it. At this point I'm not 100% happy with it, but I'll see what you guys think. Any feedback whatsoever is appreciated. Also feel free to comment or follow me on soundcloud.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/the7deadlysyns/see-you-in-the-nightosphere[/media]
It's available for free download too! If it reaches the download limit (which I highly doubt it will even come close to it) I can always upload it somewhere else.
I thought it was pretty good, except for that whatever that thing at the end was. If you do keep that little beat at the end try adding a solid tone or a quiet sound. Oh also at 1:53 you could maybe add a small transition, jumping back into the beat sounded slightly awkward. Those are just small things, keep up the good work!:v:
Really cool stuff man!!!
I think sidechaining the rhythm thing to the kick some would work [B]very[/B] effectively on this.
But I don't know - that's just my opinion.
Very cool track nevertheless. I really dig the drums and the FX!
This is awesome, but like Rad McCool said, some sidechain could do it magic.
Pretty cool only thing I could suggest would be the sidechain mentioned by Rad McCool and that to remove the HiHat 0:28 and wait till after the fill at 0:40 has finished but thats just what I would do
Sidechain those synths to the kick and/or turn them down. They're kinda loud as fuck at the moment.
Oh wow I didn't think all the feedback would be about sidechaining haha. Well I guess I'll give it a shot then, I didn't even think about that. Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll release another version soon. Keep posting your opinion so I can fix it more. Especially if it pertains to the ending because I have no idea how to properly end this one.
awesome stuff! :D
I think that the fast-paced parts of the song is lacking a little bass. I suggest moving the melody on the first synth at 0:28 one octave down, or add a seperate bass synth that isn't so intense.
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