• Powerchu's New Art - Speed Vault
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Oh hey, its me again. After losing interest in the Meet the Team TF2 drawings, i decided to drift to Parkour. Yes. I now participate wholeheartly in Parkour. Without furthur ado, [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Speed_Vault_Parkour.JPG[/img] C&C please.
The legs and the feet need some work. You need to understand how to push objects back by putting something on top of them. [url]http://www.supertightstuff.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/parkour-featured-pic.jpg[/url] Look at the legs of this guy. They are bended and thus on one of the legs you can only see the shins and on the other the thigh has been shortened because of its angle. Also take a look at his shoe. You need to treat every limp as a three-dimensional building block; a bit like a complicated lego sculpture. The different body parts have to make sense given their angle and their anatomy. It takes time to learn but if you work out from reference pictures it might be easier to understand the depth you need to add. A positive thing I can say is the coloring. Especially the way you colored the jumper is very nice and stylish.
Hands are supposed to be of same lenght. Time, space and everyhting are all merged on that one. The hood seems tobe standing still, along with the torso, while legs are way ahead of them, getting ready for landing, but still they are behind them. Draw out the skeletons, work out the proportions by arguing with yourself and look up tutorials on stuff.
Bad pose for a speed vault. -SFParkour
[QUOTE=Kagrs;20474240]The legs and the feet need some work. You need to understand how to push objects back by putting something on top of them. [url]http://www.supertightstuff.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/parkour-featured-pic.jpg[/url] Look at the legs of this guy. They are bended and thus on one of the legs you can only see the shins and on the other the thigh has been shortened because of its angle. Also take a look at his shoe. You need to treat every limp as a three-dimensional building block; a bit like a complicated lego sculpture. The different body parts have to make sense given their angle and their anatomy. It takes time to learn but if you work out from reference pictures it might be easier to understand the depth you need to add. A positive thing I can say is the coloring. Especially the way you colored the jumper is very nice and stylish.[/QUOTE] Hey! Thanks for the suggestion on how to draw the anatomy. Yes, i agree that the legs are unclear on which is infront. Thanks for clarifying. [editline]08:08PM[/editline] [QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;20475869]Hands are supposed to be of same length. [/QUOTE] Actually, the top shoulder is covered by hoodie. And the hoodie fell on his shoulders when jumping. I agree on the legs though.
I like it very much. Don't mind the others, most Creationism Corner Facepunchers can be [del]dicks[/del] very picky. For average Joe art it's great IMO.
I somehow felt like it was directed towards me. I'll se to it that someone does an overdrawing. Now where's that bloke I lent my tablet to.... [editline]07:39PM[/editline] [QUOTE=powerchu;20491292] Actually, the top shoulder is covered by hoodie. And the hoodie fell on his shoulders when jumping. [/QUOTE] Makes sence, since we all know how hair [U]doesn't[/U] blow through your hair when you move fast. Even in still images laws of physics and common sense apply. Making alot of windy stuff and such helps to create a good illusion of movement. On second day of viewing it, I gotta admit, you got the face pretty much right for the style along with the hair and colours, tough shoes could use some less saturation. [editline]08:23PM[/editline] Oh, also center of balance.
[IMG]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/060/4/7/flow_by_shether.png[/IMG] So umm, 3v3 asked me to do this snice I'm borrowing his tablet, hope it helps you!
yeah the feet need a little work, it looks like his bottom foot is twisting.
Looks more like breakdancing than parkour [editline]06:22AM[/editline] For reasons stated above
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