Kinda, yeah.
The bird part just didn't seem even remotely real.
-snip not first language-
Sort out the grammar it makes no sense
Gotta say dude, bullshit.
Is English your first language? What class is this for?
English is my 3rd language. Writing 90
Taking class because its required. Fuck
Ah, that makes sense.
Well good luck!
Someone was nice enough to point out pretty much all grammar errors. Just wanna say thank you :)
And thank you everyone for feedback.
For the future, would anyone care to recommend a service or software for proofreading and/or checking grammar?
[QUOTE=P1X3;39429577]Someone was nice enough to point out pretty much all grammar errors. Just wanna say thank you :)
And thank you everyone for feedback.
For the future, would anyone care to recommend a service or software for proofreading and/or checking grammar?[/QUOTE][img]http://blog.tmcnet.com/blog/rich-tehrani/uploads/paper-clip.jpg[/img]
[i]It looks like English isn't your first language! Would you like some help?[/i]
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