I've made a lot of new wip songs!
[media]http://soundcloud.com/kpence/red-flag-2[/media]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/kpence/07-1[/media]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/kpence/nothing-to-lose-2[/media]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/kpence/03-2[/media]
[media]http://soundcloud.com/kpence/04-1[/media]
I'm wondering if I can get some c&c
And the one I probably shouldn't bother sharing:
[media]http://soundcloud.com/kpence/05-1[/media]
Sorry bro, but you really gotta work on getting your notes right.
Pros:
Good structuring
good fx
Cons:
Synths are way too basic
Sometimes melody's are out of key
Sometimes melody notes are placed wrong.
Your drums are pretty bad.
I can hear fl studio presets in there.
I shouldn't have called these wip, I'm abandoning most of them.
[QUOTE=PhaZe!;34913424]Sorry bro, but you really gotta work on getting your notes right.[/QUOTE]
No need to be sorry, you saying that is the only way for me to get better, but I would love if you were more specific, because I don't think I know how to apply your comment to ameliorating music making.
[QUOTE=Dankie;34915231]I can hear fl studio presets in there.[/QUOTE]
I didn't use any.. Which one's are you talking about? I used Soundgoodizer which does the Maximus presets. That's all though. I used one kick from a fl studio pack for a song, and 2 or 3 hats for songs. I think you're talking about one of the songs I used a Vocodex preset, the most "lazy" one in my opinion.
[QUOTE=Dead Madman;34913777]Pros:
Good structuring
good fx
Cons:
Synths are way too basic
Sometimes melody's are out of key
Sometimes melody notes are placed wrong.
Your drums are pretty bad.[/QUOTE]
The melody is an easy fix, honestly I can tell if they're bad and just adjust.
Yes, I'm no good at making synths, I'm going to spend an hour trying to make cool patches and then master them.
Are my drums okay in Red Flag though? Because that's the only one I really tried to make good in compression, eq, and sequencing.
Song #3 has an fl studio preset snare. I cringe when I hear it, no fault of your own but I used that same sound a lot and it makes me want to die when I hear it.
[QUOTE=Dankie;34965816]Song #3 has an fl studio preset snare. I cringe when I hear it, no fault of your own but I used that same sound a lot and it makes me want to die when I hear it.[/QUOTE]
Actually, I sampled the snare from a drum loop called DCT_122_Goddy_14.wav in a folder called DemoLoops-Wav (I forgot where I got it from) and edited out the low so I could put in my own kicks.
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