Critique my latest instrumental (FFO: Hip hop, space, video games, ninjas)
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I want to hear what y'all think
whipped it up real qwik today on mah laptop
don't be too harsh, trying to get better
[url]https://soundcloud.com/acemavryk/sadstateofaffairs[/url]
anything helps,
thanks guys
[QUOTE=SickJits;46738329]I want to hear what y'all think
whipped it up real qwik today on mah laptop
don't be too harsh, trying to get better
[url]https://soundcloud.com/acemavryk/sadstateofaffairs[/url]
anything helps,
thanks guys[/QUOTE]
Too complicated to be an instrumental, would be fine on it's own though. The high bass/treb contrast (especially since it's virtually constant) would make lyrics pretty difficult to hear without tuning down the beat a bit. Also the beat changes very often, which would make rhyming to it very hard. I'm sure it can be done, it just seems more like it's own thing rather than a backing track.
[editline]17th December 2014[/editline]
If you were aiming for a backing track, I would suggest more defined beats, and instead of making it less constant and slowing the rhythm, you can quiet down the sounds other than the main base and kick, and give them a more pronounced beat, it sounds very random how it is now, and like I said, hard to get a flow on. Also it is [I]very[/I] fast for a beat.
All the instrumentals I make I can rap over no problem, i'm not worried about that. i think i may need a little more consistency. i scooped out the mids a little to clean it up and so the vocals will have a nice pocket to lay in
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