Some of it's old, some of it's new.
Looking for some CC action.
[url]http://superkusokao.deviantart.com/art/TF2-Offense-128964249[/url]
[IMG]http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/SuperKusoKao/Offense.png[/IMG]
[url]http://superkusokao.deviantart.com/art/xx-Deadpool-xx-127277895[/url]
[IMG]http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/SuperKusoKao/xx_Deadpool_xx_by_SuperKusoKao-1.png[/IMG]
[url]http://superkusokao.deviantart.com/art/TF2-Soldier-126207483[/url]
[IMG]http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/SuperKusoKao/TF2___Soldier_by_SuperKusoKao.png[/IMG]
[url]http://superkusokao.deviantart.com/art/TF2-Rock-on-Pyro-126210110[/url]
[IMG]http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/SuperKusoKao/Tf2___Rock_on__Pyro_by_SuperKusoKao.png[/IMG]
I'll draw some more later. Here's my deviantART [url]http://www.superkusokao.deviantart.com[/url] Faves and Watches welcome.
Except the first one, they have too much lines. Feels kinda wipish :/
Oh cool I didn't know you posted here. I have several of your stuff on favourites
Damn I wish I could draw.
[QUOTE=edja007;15959998]Except the first one, they have too much lines. Feels kinda wipish :/[/QUOTE]
I don't really know what's the problem with that. Do they look worse because of it? Because I think it actually adds to it. Look at Deadpool for example. I don't think it'd look as badass without all the squiggly lines.
Nice work.
[QUOTE=Bugga12;15963398]I don't really know what's the problem with that. Do they look worse because of it? Because I think it actually adds to it. Look at Deadpool for example. I don't think it'd look as badass without all the squiggly lines.
Nice work.[/QUOTE]
In some cases messy lines really adds a whole bunch of charm, but in this case I would have too agree, the lines looks too messy and unorganized, if you know what I mean. Messy lines tends to be more or less planned in one way or another (adding them or removing those not looking good or other techniques).
The red guy works with messy lines, though I could see him look really nice with clean thick lines, comic thick.
The Pyro and Soldier on the other hand could need some cleaning. The Pyro is so close to clean lines that the slighly messy look of it just ruins it rather than "coolify" it in my eyes. Either mess it up more or clean it.
The Soldier needs more firm shapes, the messiness pretty much ruins his shapes making him look relatively deformed.
That's my two cents about that.
Colourwise I find the Pyro's red lines to be distasteful, he got too many colours to make the red lines stylish, make it a darker red or black. Possibly test out with the other colours he has, like the brown. His background is, meh, it's the classical stripes, make something explode out of him instead of something coming from the sides, also the colour could maybe be more yellow, I think the clear red/blue contrast doesn't suit it well, probably because the red and blue colour isn't very strong, especially not the blue.
The Soldier background could need stronger colours, the explosion lacks impact which stronger colours possibly could aid it with, otherwise I like it, just clean it up.
I'd love to see Deadpool either cleaned up with nice thick lines or just clean up some of the mess here and there, there is too much stuff sticking out everywhere, like the shoulder, the shoulder should be cleaned up as it is a pure black area it doesn't even look stylish to have things pop out of it. Otherwise I love it, I really do.
For the group picture it seems the Pyro was scanned in blurry? Well, anyways, the head of the Pyro seems too thin, especially since his left eye sticks out of the mask, bad cut out maybe?
I don't like the line you add to their noses, it looks, ugly as it doesn't give any sense of highlight or height line. The Soldiers chin seems to have been moved unnaturally much to the left, didn't notice it before a long time though, but now that I have seen it, it looks like his face is shopped in since it doesn't follow the nature of his cheek's placement. The Scout's eye is too far away from the nose which really adds to the creepy look he has. I also don't know of anyone who would hold the bat like that, one would normally relax the elbow by dropping it down, not forcing yourself to hold it up in a straight line.
Despite all this it looks really good though, it's mostly nitpicking, overall it looks very good.
The first pyro look badass
Very good work on all, but Deadpoll's arm look kinda strange
Scouts cap is blocky. D:?
[QUOTE=dgg;15963814]In some cases messy lines really adds a whole bunch of charm, but in this case I would have too agree, the lines looks too messy and unorganized, if you know what I mean. Messy lines tends to be more or less planned in one way or another (adding them or removing those not looking good or other techniques).
The red guy works with messy lines, though I could see him look really nice with clean thick lines, comic thick.
The Pyro and Soldier on the other hand could need some cleaning. The Pyro is so close to clean lines that the slighly messy look of it just ruins it rather than "coolify" it in my eyes. Either mess it up more or clean it.
The Soldier needs more firm shapes, the messiness pretty much ruins his shapes making him look relatively deformed.
That's my two cents about that.
Colourwise I find the Pyro's red lines to be distasteful, he got too many colours to make the red lines stylish, make it a darker red or black. Possibly test out with the other colours he has, like the brown. His background is, meh, it's the classical stripes, make something explode out of him instead of something coming from the sides, also the colour could maybe be more yellow, I think the clear red/blue contrast doesn't suit it well, probably because the red and blue colour isn't very strong, especially not the blue.
The Soldier background could need stronger colours, the explosion lacks impact which stronger colours possibly could aid it with, otherwise I like it, just clean it up.
I'd love to see Deadpool either cleaned up with nice thick lines or just clean up some of the mess here and there, there is too much stuff sticking out everywhere, like the shoulder, the shoulder should be cleaned up as it is a pure black area it doesn't even look stylish to have things pop out of it. Otherwise I love it, I really do.
For the group picture it seems the Pyro was scanned in blurry? Well, anyways, the head of the Pyro seems too thin, especially since his left eye sticks out of the mask, bad cut out maybe?
I don't like the line you add to their noses, it looks, ugly as it doesn't give any sense of highlight or height line. The Soldiers chin seems to have been moved unnaturally much to the left, didn't notice it before a long time though, but now that I have seen it, it looks like his face is shopped in since it doesn't follow the nature of his cheek's placement. The Scout's eye is too far away from the nose which really adds to the creepy look he has. I also don't know of anyone who would hold the bat like that, one would normally relax the elbow by dropping it down, not forcing yourself to hold it up in a straight line.
Despite all this it looks really good though, it's mostly nitpicking, overall it looks very good.[/QUOTE]
Yeah. Some of these started out as quick sketches (hence the messiness) so I just decided to add those lame colors in.
The Pyro is blurry. I need to rescan this picture and fix it up in Photoshop when my computer is working again.
I had a really hard time drawing their faces since I haven't drawn in a while. Especially on paper. It's just so different from a tablet.
The lines on the noses, I'm just used to doing that. It's what I do.
I rarely draw the Soldier so that's probably why his face is weird.
The Scout's probably holding the bat like maybe because I can't draw holding bats. I'll try to fix that.
Thank you for all of that. I'm not used to getting so much, so I'll make sure and work on what you said.
[QUOTE=Joxalot;15964175]But Deadpoll's arm look kinda strange[/QUOTE]
Well well, seems like I missed something major here.
The holder that overlaps his arm isn't distinguished well enough from the arm, and when you add to his arm being unnaturally twisted (his elbow should stick out to the left side from our view) it looks really weird.
The muscle to the right next to his elbow also seems really boxy and kind of cuts off a bit of his arm as it doesn't blend in with the round muscle below (it creates a big empty space/crack between them)
[QUOTE=Superkusokao;15967393]Yeah. Some of these started out as quick sketches (hence the messiness) so I just decided to add those lame colors in.
The Pyro is blurry. I need to rescan this picture and fix it up in Photoshop when my computer is working again.
I had a really hard time drawing their faces since I haven't drawn in a while. Especially on paper. It's just so different from a tablet.
The lines on the noses, I'm just used to doing that. It's what I do.
I rarely draw the Soldier so that's probably why his face is weird.
The Scout's probably holding the bat like maybe because I can't draw holding bats. I'll try to fix that.
Thank you for all of that. I'm not used to getting so much, so I'll make sure and work on what you said.[/QUOTE]
Hehe, I can recognize myself (and many others) in that. "Ugh... Well, it'll probably look okay if I do this and this to it."
Yeah paper and tablet really is two different worlds. Oh well, it'll easier distinguish you from others, but you should work on making it look like it's a part of the nose and not just something that is there, I'm sure you can experiment your way through some nice look to it. It's more of a skeleton/anatomy problem than single-person problem, you just grabbed his cheek and dragged it all the way to the left. The placement of the bat and arm and all is like it should be, I tested myself, it's just that the elbow should go further down, relax it.
Ooo, that's something unusual to hear.
[QUOTE=Superkusokao;15967400]Really? Who are you?[/QUOTE]
You don't know who Jojje is? Pfffft to you.
[QUOTE=Jojje;15960097]Oh cool I didn't know you posted here. I have several of your stuff on favourites[/QUOTE]
Really? Who are you?
[QUOTE=Superkusokao;15967400]Really? Who are you?[/QUOTE]
You don't know who Jojje is? Pfffft to you.
[QUOTE=edja007;15968297]You don't know who Jojje is? Pfffft to you.[/QUOTE]
Ha.
I figured it out who he was.
This is what I fucking call an art thread. Good job man very nice.
pretty cool stuff.. i personally like the sketchyness of it all, seems to fit in with the style. although i think it would look a bit better with darker outlines, rather than the fully saturated ones you got there. Also dead pools hand is really wrong. The fingers seem to be getting longer as they go down to the pinky. Thumb starts a bit too soon, and the tricep should be facing a bit more to the left. other than that tis cool stuff.
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