• A bit of graphic design. c/c appreciated :)
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[IMG]http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a379/aaronnoraa/FYHflyer-1.jpg[/IMG] Whatcha think?
I can see what you're trying to accomplish but there is TOO much there. The background splatters of blue and the lines going through her are distracting.
[QUOTE=onox37;27211602]I can see what you're trying to accomplish but there is TOO much there. The background splatters of blue and the lines going through her are distracting.[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a379/aaronnoraa/FYHflyer1.jpg[/IMG] any better?
brush rape much?
[QUOTE=Lazore;27211892]brush rape much?[/QUOTE] Helpful. Really.
To be honest it looks like you spammed a bunch of brushes, instead of designing something. I'd suggest taking away so much paint effect brushes on the edge and the color in the middle is just randomly put there.
If you made the brushes in the background all one colour/transparency so they blended together as one solid colour I think it would look less "noisy" [editline]5th January 2011[/editline] In the second image I am talking about.
[QUOTE=The FBI;27211915]Helpful. Really.[/QUOTE] It was helpful because you should not do it. EVER [editline]5th January 2011[/editline] a.k.a its horrible [editline]5th January 2011[/editline] Also welcome to the creative subforum, we dont like brushrape or people who randomly splat paint on a canvas
In my opinion you just need to simplify it a bit, make the figure stand out more; more contrast. At the moment it seems really messy and hard to distinguish the figure.
What the hell is going on there. The second version is better, but it's still a bit messy.
Holy shit, wasn't before you put up the edited version I realized there was actually a person in there. It just looked like a random mess. Try and use some rule of thirds on her eye/face to bring in some focus or something, maybe give her some more space. EDIT: Roughly like this: [IMG]http://oi54.tinypic.com/volz5c.jpg[/IMG]
Couldn't tell there was anyone in the image until the above post. Make her stand out more. I can't really say I should tell you exactly how as we're supposed to give you direction and not absolute design choices, but really she needs to have something that makes her pop.
Wow holy fucking shit? That blue shit WAS HAIR?! You really need to make that lady stand out with some more details, at least make her body colour slightly more grey or something, or make the hair grey so it doesn't contrast so much to her pale white skin. Terrible piece being so full of brush rape, and so stuffed. Kagrs is however on to something, but just based on what you've made which in itself doesn't really work, you need to work on a more clean and visible idea rather than this brushraped pure black, pure white, random blue work.
What sort of graphic are you going for OP? Try being simple with graphics, subtle things (imo) are much more eye catching and interesting than what you've got right now.
So uh, what did you design?
Is that outer glow? :sigh:
Her hair takes attention away from her, make it something dull and outline her with something
There are a bunch of clashing styles here. The white splotches are chaotic splatters, the hair looks like watercolor, and the girl looks like a spraypaint stencil. It would look better if it had a unified style. Also what the shit is going on around her chest?
Simplicity is key. Also, unfortunately, that idea is so generic that it has become hard to criticize effectively.
This is way better than anything I could do.
[QUOTE=Xenoyia v2;27290918]This is way better than anything I could do.[/QUOTE] That's because you can't do anything
[QUOTE=Xenoyia v2;27290918]This is way better than anything I could do.[/QUOTE] I hate when people say this. Why would anyone think this would be anything noteworthy? It's like saying "It's 36 degrees outside, [B]wow, that's almost 37![/B]"
I'm just saying I think it looks pretty nice. Could be a good poster etc. No need to be all "Oh god you have a different opinion from me YOU ARE DUMB!".
What the hell are you trying to accomplish witht that? It's just too random it doesn't communicate anything.
[QUOTE=Xenoyia v2;27305080]I'm just saying I think it looks pretty nice. Could be a good poster etc. No need to be all "Oh god you have a different opinion from me YOU ARE DUMB!".[/QUOTE] Why you want to have a brushrape on your wall is beyond me, but here in the real world, we have something like "standarts"
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27305248]Why you want to have a brushrape on your wall is beyond me, but here in the real world, we have something like "standarts"[/QUOTE] I like abstract art.
[IMG]http://i429.photobucket.com/albums/qq13/Element_Spirits/BrushRape.png[/IMG] [editline]9th January 2011[/editline] lol guyz i maek art to
[QUOTE=Xenoyia v2;27305366]I like abstract art.[/QUOTE] This is not abstract art.
[QUOTE=Elements;27305761][img_thumb]http://i429.photobucket.com/albums/qq13/Element_Spirits/BrushRape.png[/img_thumb] [editline]9th January 2011[/editline] lol guyz i maek art to[/QUOTE] Now that's something I'd make a poster of. I'm serious.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27305964]Now that's something I'd make a poster of. I'm serious.[/QUOTE] Still can't tell if it is sarcasm, so... IF IT IS- Dude totally! IF IT IS NOT- Dude, really? I tried making that thing as visually offending as possible.
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