Late for Halloween, i know, so no need for clocks.
As always, i've been an ignorant fuck and didn't pay alot of interest in perspective, altough i don't really see any MAJOR mistakes.
Enjoy!
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I know it's late, but Happy Halloween!
[img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/309/5/e/headless_horseman_rises_by_xephio-d3282f3.jpg[/img]
You couldn't have spent like 5 more minutes making the trees more detailed?
Just sayin'
I sticked with the simple black trees.
But yeah, it probably would've looked better if detailed.
the trees are awesome, but the guy looks a bit wierd
Isn't it Horseless Headmann, not Headless Horseman?
Horseless Headless Horsemann
Its nice but why does it look like there's a dick that's been covered in bleach poking out from behind his shoulder? What is it?
You should draw The Headtaker on his back.
He should be holding the pumpkin up with one finger like a basketball.
The dildo stick behind him IS the Headtaker, but you can only see the handle.
And there are 2 lightsources, the moon and the pumpkin, that's why there is light on his chest AND on his back. (which you obivously cant see)
[QUOTE=JoeyZ;25876547]You couldn't have spent like 5 more minutes making the trees more detailed?
Just sayin'[/QUOTE]Agreed. It's just one straight line sticking out of another straight line to make the trees. The picture itself isn't bad, but the trees almost make the background look kind of childlike.
The shading is blurry, the proportions are off, especially the legs. Fog is quite well done. Trees are the pinnacle of half-assment and so are the gravestones. The shading on them makes them look more round, only a tone in the back of our head that recognizes the shape is helping us recognize them as grave stones.
Pumpkin is just a flobby piece of shit, it lacks any contrast values what so ever and the lighting isn't atmospheric nor does it make any sense. The chest, I don't know what that shit is but I'm sure it isn't made of matte plastic you shaded it to be. The cloth should have atleast some folds on it, cause it's... you know, cloth? Speaking of which there is not really any material definition to speak off. It's just all the same shit, different asshole over the whole image. The angle on that thing on his back is awfully off and no one knows what the shit it is sposed to be. Then there's alot and I mean ALOT of anatomical mistakes.
Just should've used a reference. I don't know what else helpful to say. I can do a redline, tough?
[QUOTE=Pespi;25893343]The shading is blurry, the proportions are off, especially the legs. Fog is quite well done. Trees are the pinnacle of half-assment and so are the gravestones. The shading on them makes them look more round, only a tone in the back of our head that recognizes the shape is helping us recognize them as grave stones.
Pumpkin is just a flobby [b]piece of shit[/b], it lacks any contrast values what so ever and the lighting isn't atmospheric nor does it make any sense. The chest, I don't know what that [b]shit[/b] is but I'm sure it isn't made of matte plastic you shaded it to be. The cloth should have atleast some folds on it, cause it's... you know, cloth? Speaking of which there is not really any material definition to speak off. It's just all the same [b]shit[/b], different [b]asshole[/b] over the whole image. The angle on that thing on his back is [b]awfully[/b] off and no one knows what the [b]shit[/b] it is sposed to be. Then there's alot and I mean ALOT of anatomical mistakes.
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You talk like i've insulted your mother and then told you i could draw better than your whole family together.
Calm down for christ sake.
Thanks for the critique though
Sorry I'm used to talk like that.
Nazi, you see.
He looks like he's posing for playgirl
Oh pespi never change.
Clothing looks more like rubber. Probably because of the shine and curvature of it.
[QUOTE=Pespi;25894453]Sorry I'm used to talk like that.
Nazi, you see.[/QUOTE]
Do you ever like anyone's work?
Only the work of god is the work I love.
[QUOTE=Pespi;25949692]Only the work of god is the work I love.[/QUOTE]
a.k.a yours
You think of me way too highly.
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