Thread closed as it has been given in for review by the client. :)
Thanks to those that gave some crits!
The design is really practical, very sleek.
I don't think the background fits though, it looks unsophisticated to me. That and the "MY" in the "Make-up MY Day" looks unrefined aswell, the shadowing is too harsh and ruins it for me, I would consider changing it to a lighter gray without the harsh edges. It also sits on a white block which cuts into the back heading, personally I would have left it black and inverted the logo, thing.
I also think the pink text as the sub headings isn't bold enough, it looks kind of boring, perhaps it's the shade of pink- it just looks a bit subdued to me.
I agree the shadowing in the "MY" should go.
Nice work otherwise.
Thanks for the crits guys, really useful!
I agree with the "MY" unfortunately, I did not design the brand/logo so I will have to talk to my client about that...
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