I'm currently writing an essay about the Athenian empire. The question is "Account for the development of the Athenian Empire to 440BC". Does anyone have any essays they have written on the subject who could send me theirs or give me samples of theirs so I can get on path? It would greatly appreciate it because I haven't had much time to study because of shit going on with my family.
Cheers.
[editline]26th April 2012[/editline]
Thanks
I'm not sure how long your essay needs to be, but from my own experience, a good essay usually has
Introduction-
Attention Getter
Narrow to Thesis
Thesis Statement
Point 1-
Introduce P1
Support 1 (For longer essays, supporting points should be paragraphs on their own.)
Support 2
Support 3
(Continue with as many as needed)
Point 2- (Remember to relate back to previous points.)
Transition to P2
Support 1
Support 2
Support 3
(More as needed)
Continue adding points and supporting points as needed, transitions are important.
Conclusion-
Relate to Attention Getter
Narrow back to Thesis
Close be rephrasing thesis.
Probably not the help you wanted if helpful at all, but it's something.
Don't forget citations and a works cited.
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