Mine is the first story off of Lost Odyssey
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Kaim walks through the door. The family embraced him and gave their greetings."I would like to see Hanna" Kaim says. "Okay, but she might not recognize you. She hasn't opened her eyes since last night." The innkeeper says. "That's okay, I just want to share my last story with her." Instead of a smile, a huge ear falls out of the innkeeper's eye. Kaim has learned that the first thing you lost before your death was speech, then sight, then, what stays until the very end is your hearing. At this time he was coming home from war, rather moving from battlefield to battlefield. Moreover, the slightest twist in destiny would have made his comrades
his foes and vise-versa. Living as an immortal, everyone he killed was scarred into his mind. Normally, he would find liquor and try to forget the unforgettable. Then he met her. She was named Hanna and was frail from birth. The doctor told her parents that she wouldn't make it. There she was, she had never left the town, moreover she had never left the neighborhood. Every time someone would leave she would say "Bring me back more stories!" She had loved stories. When Hanna asks to Kaim "Who are you? Where are you from? Do you have any stories?" it lit a small glow in his chest. He told her of the beautiful woods where they retreated to, the great taste of the river water and the amazing views of the mountains. Never anything bad, for not for her purity but for his own sake. "I want to the oceans today. I saw nothing but sea. Sea and sky! Can you picture it?" Kaim said. "Of course, you've never seen the ocean but people have told you about it right? It's like a giant puddle." He had never mentioned the blood that stained it red. "You are going to a place, a great place. One of which I have never seen. You will be free, able to visit all those places from the great sky!" These were his final words to her. "See you again". This was his final lie to her. The pale cheek moved and one last tear fell before the brittle thread of life finally snapped.
The glow in Kaim's heart went out.[/quote]
These weren't the EXACT words but close enough I think.
one time there was an ugly barnacle, he was so ugly that everyone died, the end
I've written a couple angsty things. But they're usually between 4,000 to 15,000 words, and I don't want to constipate this thread.
[QUOTE=slippp22;19909137]one time there was an ugly barnacle, he was so ugly that everyone died, the end[/QUOTE]
That didn't help at all!
My friends shoplifted a store and were VERY close from going to jail.
[QUOTE=Egg_Toaster;19909451]My friends shoplifted a store and were VERY close from going to jail.[/QUOTE]
Your friends shoplifted a whole store?
[QUOTE=Shoupie;19909166]I've written a couple angsty things. But they're usually between 4,000 to 15,000 words, and I don't want to constipate this thread.[/QUOTE]
Why not? Just kidding:ninja:
The one about the stray cat everyone called "ugly."
[QUOTE=slippp22;19909137]one time there was an ugly barnacle, he was so ugly that everyone died, the end[/QUOTE]
:saddowns:
[QUOTE=Mac2468;19921306]The one about the stray cat everyone called "ugly."[/QUOTE]
Aww man i remember reading that one. That one was sad.
I'm currently writing a story about a students maths trip to paris, he's a very quiet and not very well understood person, but he then meets someone that changes that...
My buddy Keith tried camping out on top of a building once. He was shooting crows, but the police were too busy tear gassin' him to ask what he was doin' up there. He screamed for an entire year every single time when he opened his eyes! Oh man! At first it was funny, then it just got sad.
Back in my day I used to live in West Philadelphia. I'd usually hang out on the playground, where I spent most of my days. You know, chilling out, relaxing, until one these couple of guys were... up to no good. They started making some trouble in the neighborhood... look, I got in one little fight and my mom flips a shit, and I have to move to some shithole named Bel-Air!
I couldn't help it.
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Nah but anyways I know a girl in class who transferred because she would always get ragged on by almost everyone in my class. This thing is RARE in my high school. They would always make fun of her, like I heard one kid say "yo she's probably sucking dick right now" when she was absent.
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