• Voice-over of the "Ghost-forums"-thread OP
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I made a voice-over for the OP in [url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=967728]this thread, about dead forums[/url]. I read the entire OP, and changed some things, for else it would sound odd. I also added sad background music. It is 1 minute and 30 seconds long, and 25MB large. Temme wat u tink. [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/The_Dead_Forums1.wav[/url]
The link is invalid, apparently.
Don't copy an abbreviated link from a post. Post the URL. the "..." is in the url which is why it doesn't work.
Reuploaded. I'm trying to remake it with a better microphone using my iPhone, however Apple has decided to assfuck me and not allow me to sync voice memos... [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/The_Dead_Forums.wav[/url] [editline]01:36AM[/editline] Okay, I remade the whole thing, with the new microphone. It sounds [i]LOTS[/i] better, both in acting and quality. So if you listened to it before, I highly recommend you re-listen to it. [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/The_Dead_Forums1.wav[/url]
Why don't you fix the mistakes?
Maybe I'll even give it a try with my new mic setup.
Did you use a program to lower your voice? I don't know if it's just me but your voice has a cadence to it which reminds me of computer generated voices. It might just be an accent. You started off well, pretty confident but sometimes you mumble or don't make the words clear enough. Every so often I hear your voice stuggle to go lower on your register, perhaps practice a bit more to make it easier. In my opinion, you didn't sound sad enough and the end line didn't sound very dramatic. I really liked how you changed your voice for the quote but it didn't really sound like a plea. I love the last line in the quot: the way your voice cracks is lovely.
[QUOTE=jenny7332;24051212]Did you use a program to lower your voice? I don't know if it's just me but your voice has a cadence to it which reminds me of computer generated voices. It might just be an accent. You started off well, pretty confident but sometimes you mumble or don't make the words clear enough. Every so often I hear your voice stuggle to go lower on your register, perhaps practice a bit more to make it easier. In my opinion, you didn't sound sad enough and the end line didn't sound very dramatic. I really liked how you changed your voice for the quote but it didn't really sound like a plea. I love the last line in the quot: the way your voice cracks is lovely.[/QUOTE] Yeah, my voice is breaking, and you know how the voice switches between light and deep? I'm sadly in a light period, so I had to lower the pitch of my voice by 12% in AudaCity. And the struggling is because whenever I read off a text like that, I often miss a word or two, and I also try to focus too much on not having an accent. Other then that - thanks for the tips! :smile: [editline]04:54AM[/editline] [QUOTE=JoeyZ;24049032]Why don't you fix the mistakes?[/QUOTE] Eh. I did. Or are there any mistakes besides those pointed out that I have missed?
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