• Egging Rocks
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[IMG]http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/571/eggingrocks.png[/IMG] A WIP, I plan to finish this up to her T.T.'s Worked on this 5 hours ago. Some constructive criticism please. I worked on that damn nose for an hour. Edit: Friend asked me this, yes I did it with a mouse. Current: [IMG]http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/571/eggingrocks.png[/img]
Her left eye looks too narrow, it should be slightly wider than her right eye due to perspective. Her left eye iris is not round. I think the mouth is too far outward. otherwise it looks pretty nice. Tell your friend tablets don't mean shit when it comes to pixel art.
I did a small comparison with the original reference. You're pretty much right with the eyes. To Do List: Left eye needs to be skewed and lifted, right eye needs to be stretched to the right and down a bit. (She's a bit Shannon Doherty right now.) Chin needs to be a bit smaller, jaw needs to be a bit bigger, hair needs to be enlarged. Mouth needs to be a bit puffier I am on it naaow.
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Update! [IMG]http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/571/eggingrocks.png[/IMG] Fixed her nose a bit and played around with her eyes. I got her eyes to a horrible anime look and ended up redoing it. The pallet I used gave her a bit of a tan so I plan on redoing the pallet later. I was about ready to say that [del]Megan Fox[/del] Whinefeld is too hot to be drawn. Todo: add right eyebrow. Edit: Todo: she has sort of a beard, I might find different colors that aren't as dark.
I think her mouth needs to be a bit wider, and her left eye probably should be a bit wider. You should probably lower her nose just a little bit too, and I think her skin-tone is slightly more orange-coloured. I have to say though, it looks really gorgeous still and right now she looks a wee bit like sigourney weaver (with a bit of megan fox), and you really improved her from the OP. Great job so far, I can't wait to see the finished product :)
Her left iris is too large now. The sharp change from dark to light tan on her neck makes her seem old.
This is a fantastic thread, an inspiration. You are getting this head very close to pic perfect and so rather than type words I just made a mod to her neck and to her cheek where I thought it needed improving. My avatar is one I'm doing right now myself. I like this thread a lot.
Update: [IMG]http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/571/eggingrocks.png[/IMG] Getting continuously awesome (It's getting better all the time). I'm not so satisfied with the left eye for some reason and the shading improved but still looks horrid on the neck imo. I might do "Listen, Q-bert!", "Wednesday Lowland" or "Artillary Duft" next. Todo: Experiment with more colors on nose. Dark part of nose isn't perfect yet. Cut out the hair and highlight it. extend bottom. I chose Megan Fox to draw because my parents are very Christian of what I look at on the net, so they don't take kindly to me staring at girls. This adds a thrill to drawing her. [QUOTE=Gregah;20627384]I think her mouth needs to be a bit wider, and her left eye probably should be a bit wider. You should probably lower her nose just a little bit too, and I think her skin-tone is slightly more orange-coloured.[/QUOTE] Stretched out the mouth a bit and it looks fantastic. The left eye needed to be smaller and the nose only needed to have a change in shading. You were right about her skin-tone though, it's almost-perfect in this update. [QUOTE=jewdozer;20631326]This is a fantastic thread, an inspiration. You are getting this head very close to pic perfect and so rather than type words I just made a mod to her neck and to her cheek where I thought it needed improving. My avatar is one I'm doing right now myself. I like this thread a lot.[/QUOTE] Do you have a picture of your mod?
Wow, you've really made a gorgeous picture look even more gorgeous now! It really captures the small features that Megan Fox have on her face, and you recognize instantly who it is. Awesome work, the small parts you've made of the hair looks really great too.
[QUOTE=BoingBoing;20644564] Do you have a picture of your mod?[/QUOTE] I thought I had posted it but clearly didn't. This is it I think> [img]http://www.imagehut.net/images/iz86jqpmkyeply1td4.png[/img] Keep at it and make it wonderful. Give her great tits.
just wanted to say WOW
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