I drew this today, most of it was straight on with a fine liner, but I sketched the arms out a bit before I drew it. Let me know what you lot think:
[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Nintyman_2007/Picture010-1.jpg[/IMG]
Did he break his right foot?
[QUOTE=BigSmokeDawg;17844984]I drew this today, most of it was straight on with a fine liner, but I sketched the arms out a bit before I drew it. Let me know what you lot think:
[IMG]http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Nintyman_2007/Picture010-1.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
I like the art style, but....
One arm is way longer than the other, his foot looks like it has been bent, and his upper body is way too small for the rest of him.
The crotch area looks pretty goofy. Like he has taffy legs.
Why does it say the picture was taken January 4? It looks pretty good. It does have some anatomy problems though. I dont know that much about anatomy so you should ask one of the veteran artists here.
I like it, that is, if you say it's "styleized", otherwise, the arm proportions are gonna attract attention from the mighty ones...
But I still like it
Work on the anatomy... NOW!
[QUOTE=Joxalot;17849521]Work on the anatomy... NOW![/QUOTE]
He did it in pen :v:
That's isn't an excuse to it's torso have half height of it's arms
[QUOTE=Joxalot;17849606]That's isn't an excuse to it's torso have half height of it's arms[/QUOTE]
I'm just wondering how he is going to fix it. I was in now way defending his cause.
I got your point...
Well, further work then...
Using a pen is no excuse, you just sketch lightly before going over it heavily.
From what I can see
He has ape arms (arms are too long)
Torso is too narrow and short
Pants hike up his crotch like he has nothing there
One kneepad?
His right foot looks broken
His left hand looks robotic
And your gun has some anatomy issues as well.
Detail is nice but definitely work on proportions.
[QUOTE=xamllew;17852077]Using a pen is no excuse, you just sketch lightly before going over it heavily[/QUOTE]
Yeah, just use a pencil first, than go over it in pen.
[QUOTE=xamllew;17852077]One kneepad?[/QUOTE]
I think he meant to do this. Those kids and their asymmetrical characters these days.
But yeah, everything he said.
[QUOTE=Rofl my Waff;17848926]The crotch area looks pretty goofy. Like he has taffy legs.[/QUOTE]
What crotch area?
[QUOTE=Galago;17854603]What crotch area?[/QUOTE]
You get a funny. :D
noodle arms
flip flop
Damnit, More slenderman?
It's like everywhere this damned guy has been trailing me, showing up everywhere except outside my window itself.
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Oh shit.
work on everything.
Anatomy, proportions and everything else.
Did he turns his stomach into even longer legs?
ahahhahaha his foot. also hes got some long-ass arms and legs.
Haha he could scratch his knees without even bending down.
There isn't much artistic value.
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