Im a pathological liar...
I think im crazy.. maybe.
So I wrote it down.
[url]http://russellpassano.tumblr.com/[/url]
thoughts?
That was really depressing. And very stream of consciousness. Reminded me of Catcher in the Rye. You need to work on grammar and flow though, because even when you're in the weird, flashy, quick stories some of the message gets lost not only due to poor grammar but lack of direction in the story telling. Overall, it was an interesting read but the grammar errors irked me to no end, and some of the way the story was told had me confused and I had to read over it a few times. I liked it, but it still made me sort of sad.
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