I wrote this awhile ago and was hoping that I could get some pointers for my poetry.
"Jacking off alone..
A car pulls in the driveway..
The race is now on."
It came out pretty nicely for how minimal the haiku style of poetry is.
Well I sure liked it.
I laughed, I cried.
Awesome.
[QUOTE=cdejong;24372305]I would help you out,
but I too am occupied,
jacking off alone[/QUOTE]
:golfclap:
Exited the room..
Left this page on my desktop..
Mom enters the room.
The large breasted chick..
Rides dick, hot titties flopping..
Damn this is good porn.
I'm starting to become really good with this style.
I've always hated Haiku... Some people can do them perfectly well, and others make me go... What?
Haikus are awesome
but are sometimes wierd
refrigerator.
[QUOTE=Back_Slash;24433435]Haikus are awesome
but are sometimes wierd
refrigerator.[/QUOTE]
That joke is old
Jacking off alone.
Someone coming up the stairs.
Finish anyway.
:saddowns:
Jacking off together
Father cums upstairs
Fall downstairs
[QUOTE=Rick Ross;24372136]I wrote this awhile ago and was hoping that I could get some pointers for my poetry.
"Jacking off alone..
A car pulls in the driveway..
The race is now on."
It came out pretty nicely for how minimal the haiku style of poetry is.[/QUOTE]
I basically did this in English today, but I couldn't remember it exactly...
Sitting in my chair fapping
Mothers car pulls up the drive
The race is on now
Though I take zero credit for this, as I tried to write what you had
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