• Godplay- an interactive about politics, cancer and ghosts
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[img]http://ploader.net/files/6c22b62b877be937163b06ef45f47dbd.PNG[/img] [i]Welcome to life, you arent a person, yet but you will be soon. You are currently in line for selecting a body. You do not know what its going to be, but you're sure it will be human. You havent yet met god, you might want to meet him before you go. What shall you do?[/i]
that's a lot, of commas, you make. Before we start, I want to know something ; How much time did you spend on the OP?
About ten minutes, its kinda hard to put effort in this kinda style, I more think of the story than the actual art, but if you wish for me to spend more time in creating a bigger op, I shall.
If the point of the interactive to tell a story and less about the art then go for a lesser quality in the art, what I was thinking about is the language itself. I think you should proof-read the text at least once to make sure the text flows when you read it. Read it out loud, look up words if you're not sure how they are spelled.
Ask to be a rhinoceros.
OP updated
Swap bodies with the person in front of you, become a pretty mermaid. :3:
[img]http://ploader.net/files/fcc3bacc51c389f926d439d722de6320.PNG[/img] [i] The person ahead of you is a spirit, everyone in line is a spirit, its impossible to take over another spirits body. [/i]
Jump the line.
Talk to god, become an atheist.
Is the queue moving backwards or do you have to leave and go back to the end of the queue to go talk to God
Probably moonwalking, just look at the BG.
[QUOTE=Metal Chao;28419176]Is the queue moving backwards or do you have to leave and go back to the end of the queue to go talk to God[/QUOTE] They are coming from god, our ghostly pal here just overlooked his office
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