Butch Williams and Ronald March are lean, mean crime fighting detectives who stop at nothing but the truth. They've had many adventures together and have learned to set aside their differences and work together. They trust their lives to each other and always come out on top, no matter how desperate the situation looks.
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Didn't clean this up very much.
I'm thinking about putting these characters in a visual novel(japanese porn game). I don't care about your opinions on the matter but you are free to bitch and moan about that.
Added shading because I'm cool like that. I could go on about how it's my style to be minimalistic but then I would just come across as a jerk. Thanks for the constructive criticism guys. Especially Binkow, you really have a firm understanding of English grammar and constructive criticism.
Sorry to say, and I don't say this very often but...
It sucks.
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But I would suggest adding more detail & a background.
This is horrible there's not even shading
I wouldn't say "horrible", it's kinda good in a humorous kind of way, but if the mood is serious, it will need working on.
Guy one: Square Ass Chin Man.
Guy two: Round Ass Chin Man.
One round chin, one square chin...[b]two forehead noses[/b].
They look like the same guy.
[QUOTE=Arbitration;17382103]They look like the same guy.[/QUOTE]
Because they are :O
And it's humorous because they aren't edgy and stuff.
i like them
The additional shading makes it a somewhat better.
I'm thinking of making the outlines a bit thicker. What do you think?