New Production Credits For New Feature Film, Criticism Welcome
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This will be the new opening production credits for my new film being released sometime in the spring.
I hit a writing block so i decided to get this out of the way. Tell me what you guys think.
i wanted to give it a kinda dark twisted look.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7J60eA-WH_8[/media]
NEW VERSION!!!
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KjV8NrhBb94[/media]
Kick ass. I just think the words should be more visible and shown longer, too fast. Still awesome though.
[QUOTE=MrCrumbCake;16995489]Kick ass. I just think the words should be more visible and shown longer, too fast. Still awesome though.[/QUOTE]
Thanks! yeah i was thinking that last night, if i make it longer though i think i should like have a black bar or something blend in behind the name to make it more clear.
Wow that's kickass.
[QUOTE=david927;17001983]Thanks! yeah i was thinking that last night, if i make it longer though i think i should like have a black bar or something blend in behind the name to make it more clear.[/QUOTE]
Sounds cool.
Looks awesome, might want to think about the colors though, very CoD4, Splinter Cell looking.
Wow looks cool :D
After watching it several times I still don't get what the thing is in the background
anyway, it can still be improved, like if you make the logo (text) stick to the background cause right now
it looks bit out of place, or instead you could just stabilize the video so it doesn't shake =)
Can we get more info about your movie?
Pretty cool.
Nice job.
Xerios, I think its a Scanner or photocopier, might be wrong.
I think it's awesome, But I would like it more if it was darker, longer, and possibly red, but maybe not...
Thanks guys, I switched up the colorization to more reds. check it out and give me more input. I also made the text easier to read.
You David keep amazing me all the time.
I like the newer version better, but I think it is too dark. It gives off an underexposed feel.
Very nice!
Looks even sexier. Wow.
Thanks for the comments!
That's a really nice intro.
What's your film going to be about?
[QUOTE=YoMother;17020458]I don't think the text is readable enough. Are you gonna broadcast this on tv? Red on tv is like getting stabbed in the eye.[/QUOTE]
No, its being shown on a movie screen. So it should be okay. Plus there will be a high definition projector so i wont be worried about color variation.
p. cool
I kind of like the green look better
I think the length and brightness is perfect, though I might be worried about badly calibrated screens.
Very nice job on the transitions.
Amazing, I'd only echo the suggestion that the logo could be slightly clarified or have more contrast with the background, aside from that it's great. I also want to hear more about this damned film.
Your new one really kicks ass. I can't see any way how you could improve it. Great work!
I like it, but is there anyway to make the text come from under the sliding bar? As of now it kinda appears on top of it.
[QUOTE=daviddorn;17030857]I like it, but is there anyway to make the text come from under the sliding bar? As of now it kinda appears on top of it.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, i was looking into that actually. I'll update as soon as i can. :)
Also, im holding off on information until i have the script 100% finished. In which case I might release it on here. I'm also planning on releasing all productions stills and the trailer here in the upcoming months so, stay tuned!
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