• My lineart needs C&C
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[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/3016/linearto.png[/img] I would like some C&C so I can fix my shit before I color it. Thank you very much. It doesn't have a name yet, right now I'm calling it "Boš ti kurac, ja!" EDIT: Changed the flowers.
Looks nice. Only thing I really have to say is about the flowers which look odd.
[QUOTE=Joshua-029;20515573]Looks nice. Only thing I really have to say is about the flowers which look odd.[/QUOTE] The ones on the left? Shit, I really don't know how to draw flowers. Any suggestions?
Girl on the left: The hands could use some work, I would suggest finding some stock images of hands and going off them. Her left arm looks kinda thin above the elbow. First thing I noticed wrong about the girl on the right is that her right wrist looks unnaturally bent backwards. Also, her left hand is pretty blobby and she doesn't seem to have an elbow bone in her left arm. Calf is too large. Is she really tall? Ok, that's all. This is great line art though, just a few little things I see wrong, mainly the hands and wrists.
Thanks very much, I just have one question. What is a calf? I Googled it but all I got was pictures of cows.
[QUOTE=Nyaa;20529671]Thanks very much, I just have one question. What is a calf? I Googled it but all I got was pictures of cows.[/QUOTE] behind and below the knee. that's the calf.
[QUOTE=wepon;20530176]behind and below the knee. that's the calf.[/QUOTE] Thank you very much! :3
I liked the first iteration of the flowers more, and the face is awesome.
I saw this in that other thread and thought then I'd like to see that finished. On the girl with her back to us you could change her bunch to a bunch of bleeding, severed penises. That would be great.
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