Hello, this is my first complete drawing, and I'd like some criticism and/or feedback on it.
[IMG]http://sadpanda.us/images/407258-VA9H5Q2.jpg[/IMG]
It looks weird because my scanner isn't working. So I took a picture of it. If I can get it working I may re-upload it, but chances are slim.
Like I said, comments would be appreciated, and some tips too.
It took me 30 MINUTES to draw the freakin' eyebrow on the fetus.
Its verry nice, looks like a good enough copy, id try mabe using a softer pencil to get some darker shading in and mabe some shading on the shoes. Its a good start, Id sugest also redoing with colour. Keep up the good work.
1. Don't use lined paper
2. Don't smudge shade.
Otterwise it's pnice.
[QUOTE=Mr cake fingers;28786177]Its verry nice, looks like a good enough copy, id try mabe using a softer pencil to get some darker shading in and mabe some shading on the shoes. Its a good start, Id sugest also redoing with colour. Keep up the good work.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, I did this with an extremely dull #2 pencil with no eraser. I should go out soon to buy some art pencils, and maybe touch up on this with it. I shaded the shoes, too, but it either didn't pick up or it's too light to notice. I'll also have to touch that up.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28786456]1. Don't use lined paper
2. Don't smudge shade.
Otterwise it's pnice.[/QUOTE]
When I drew this, it was just gonna be a scribble. I thought of re-doing it on some fax paper, but I figured I'd never be able to re-draw it again, so I stuck with the lined paper. And the shading was looking scratchy, so I did smudge it a tiny bit. A lot of the smudging is me accidentally resting my hand on it.
Anyways, thank you for your feedback + tips, it's greatly appreciated!
Oh! And draw bigger, youl quickly find it looks more impressive.
Sorry, i just asumed this was a copy job, if it was, theres nothing wrong with that and its still very nice in my opinion, if it wasnt same thing but Id just add that you have an impressive memory.
[QUOTE=Mr cake fingers;28788733]Oh! And draw bigger, youl quickly find it looks more impressive.
Sorry, i just asumed this was a copy job, if it was, theres nothing wrong with that and its still very nice in my opinion, if it wasnt same thing but Id just add that you have an impressive memory.[/QUOTE]
Haha, the drawing pretty much takes up the entire page. I tried to draw it bigger but it felt weird. Thanks for the tip, though!
Also, I did use a reference picture off of google, but I had to leave halfway so I finished it based off of memory. That's why the tie and the left hand are different than the original (I checked when I got home)
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28786456]1. Don't use lined paper
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What if he just doodled it in class?
then it doesn't deserve a thread, now does it?
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;28797628]then it doesn't deserve a thread, now does it?[/QUOTE]
but the drawing itself is good, no?
Make up your goddamn mind if you're drawing about hypothetical doodles or the OP.
[QUOTE=Blind Weasel;28797643]but the drawing itself is good, no?[/QUOTE]
If it's a doodle then think of how good it could have been with effort?
I didn't doodle this in class, I doodled it at my home. I saw the picture on the web and wondered if I could re-create it without tracing it. Turns out I could. It looked pretty nice, so I started shading it and adding detail.
So now I decided to upload here. What exactly is the big deal with me uploading this, again?
Also, like I said, it's lacking quality because I was lacking supplies. I'll be picking up some drawing pencils in the near future (hopefully) and try and touch up on the shading, like Mr. cake fingers said.
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