• aaaa another manga/anime styled person
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asdfghjkl this was my first time using SAI's pen tool and i love it so far i like it better uncolored [IMG]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/9259/newcanvas1.png[/IMG] i thought it looked cool as the regular sketch [IMG]http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6299/sketched.png[/IMG] i am working on coloring and shading properly which i cannot do [IMG]http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3038/mangaperson.png[/IMG] and then i thought the colors would look silly on their own [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/1112/olocolors.png[/img] those eyes are pretty horrible
Cool.
She's a very pretty girl and I bet your parents are proud that you're such a talented artist. :3:
Her nose would probably be better if it was more than one line. I mean, I know that's part of the anime style, but it just doesn't look too good from that angle.
[QUOTE=Doomish;21113823]Her nose would probably be better if it was more than one line. I mean, I know that's part of the anime style, but it just doesn't look too good from that angle.[/QUOTE] yeah i saw that i dunno how to fix it though
The shading is good on the body but what is with the 5 O'Clock shadow on her face?
chin is angled horribly, nose is too low and eyes are far, far apart. Hair is too stiff, right boob is too pointy, left is... well.. shading doesn't follow any rules of logic and is missing different tones, eyes are really undetailed and what's with the neck. All mistakes that could be fixed if you didn't get that much ahead of yourself and focused 'tad bit on realistic figure drawings.
alas it is too late :( [editline]06:12AM[/editline] i wanna take some classes though [editline]07:09AM[/editline] [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6986/muscleskeleton.jpg[/img] my anatomy is suck
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